Um... · 12:01pm Mar 29th, 2013
Hi guys! If you've been following my other account, you'd know that I'm back in the game! And with a question for everybody, too!
So I was looking back on my old story (SotP) and I found it really cliche/unbelievable. People were asking me questions, such as:
Q: Where did they get the cape and sword? It just came out of nowhere!
A: I have no idea.
Q: If Celestia had the map, why didn't she know anything about the forbidden land?
A: I dunno. Maybe you can ask why she's got a map of the CRYSTAL FUCKING EMPIRE and has NO CLUE about it.
Q: SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS
A: That's not a question.
So you can obviously tell that there were a few problems regarding plot in here... And I also cringe at the fact that I made it a copypasta story. NOBODY LIKES COPYPASTA STORIES
So, should I delete it and revise it (With a better name, too: My Little Colossus: Rituals are Magic), or should I continue on as is? It's your decision!
Until next time!
-Digit
Just how different it will be, if you revise it ?
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That depends on the thoughts of it. I'm open to suggestions, whether you want me to make my own colossi or even turning Spike into a god (but I wouldn't suggest that). It's all on the viewers' part.
961517 I think you should leave the main part as it is,but think about changing a bit or removing Twilight's actions and role.