Mar
9th
2013
Ideas and a poll · 11:57pm Mar 9th, 2013
To everyone that has been enjoying my story "Pip's new home"
Starting with chapter 7 ive been thinking about adding in a few adventures with other ponies and i would love to hear peoples input. here are my ideas and id like if a few of you could comment on which one you would like to see in the story
Mrs. Harsh-Whiny as Pip's private tutor
ghost hunter Pinkiepie
Where Pip and Luna were durring the royal wedding
Twilight sparkle and spike visiting Celestia
The CMC and class on a field trip
id love if you could give me some input
i'm trying to finish looking over chapter 6
sorry i've been either busy with school or distracted by friends or the interwebs. i promise i will get it done
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KK, its fine, im trying to get ideas for chapter 7
Where Pip and Luna were during the royal wedding! That would be awesome.
904870
lol really? ive been tinkering around with the idea and it wil probobly turn into a two parter again
I'm actually good with many ideas.
Pip and Luna during the royal wedding sounds like something fun to read, especially seeing as only Luna appeared at the end.
Twilight Sparkle and Spike would be nice, especially since they could relate to Pipsqueak on some level. (Didn't the two of them live at the castle?)
And well, the CMC he at least knows somewhat...so a class trip could be funny too. They could meet Pipsqueak and thinking that the little pony just sneaked in? Or that he is part of the class? And after a lot of struggle, Luna swoops down and is actually pissed because they 'tried to take her friend away'?
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Its trying to decide which to do that is bothersome
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Like, what to do first? You can write all that stuff and even more! (If it doesn't fit that story, write a side-story to that...)
Which tickles your fancy the most? Which interests you from your ideas? You are the author and you are in charge of your story.
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good point, i am going down the CMC and class trip line right now, just confused on how to make it blend
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Well, take an outside view and let Cherilee explain the class trip...(that actually would be enough for a reason for the class to go there)
Then some comments from the CMC about getting their cutie-marks and voila! They can meet Pip (and subsequently Princess Luna as well).
If you put it at the beginning, it even sounds like a cold opening and then everyone notices how it ties into the story...well, at least in my imagination
Well you did ask me what I think and I have to say it is quite fun. Quite fun indeed. If you wanted my advice, for a little bit of comedy I'd say to try and do something like what I did in Love and Honour where they go around the castle in a fantasy styled adventure thinking that they are pirates as they search for the food and totally make a mess of the castle. Then I'd say try out the whole private tutor, have Pip get heavily discouraged from the tutor's rather harsh nature then have Luna take Pip as her own 'Faithful student'. I don't know, it's your story but that's what came up in my head. Pretty wicked story so far and can't wait for more
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thanks, currently im about half-way through chapter 7 and the CMC are coming to visit... now i just need to shake this damnable writers block