Always Connected- redone

Hello everypony

So I went back the other day and did a full and comprehensive re-edit of my very first fanfic; Always Connected.

Originally, it was very rough, mainly because I wrote it in the space of three days around University work. But I hope that it is much better now.
The other thing I wanted to let people know about is my 'Always Connected-Verse'
A lot of people aren't aware that there are five stories in the series, and so may only read one of them and not have the context of the rest of the universe.

In order of the canon, the stories go; Always Connected
A New Harmony
The Element of Laughter
Dusk Rises
Always Connected- Aftermath
And sometime in the future, I will be posting the sequel to 'The Element of Laughter,' entitled 'Broken Laughter'
I'm really interested to know what people think of the new edits.

Comments

[Triforce of the Gods]

And now people can read them in order instead of the order they released like I did

[Nerow NeighSayer]

I've just got a one question, will you still be continuing Equine Vampiris?

[The-rogue-shadow]

914196
Of course. This was just me doing an edit on my first ever fanfic from about a year ago. So i'm still doing Equine Vampiris, chapter 6 is currently with my editor. I'm still doing 'Star's Trek: The Search for Luna,' 'Uncharted: Applejack's Journey,' 'The Luna Diaries' and 'Harmony isn't Everywhere'

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914200 Just checking. My read it later list has gotten WAY too long (by my standards) so I was looking to shorten it a bit. It's still on there btw.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914206
Were you looking to take it off if it was on hiatus or something?

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914236 well it was more like looking at update trends on uncompleted stories and removing them if they haven't updated for awhile based off the trend.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914353
Well that makes sense. I'd update a lot more often if I didn't send stuff to my editor, but I really need her help.

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914359 's not a problem I just don't like to start a fic and have to stop half way through 'cause it's not finished, (which is why my read it later list is so long). I've got too many half finished and it's a pain to have to reread it when one finally updates, so I tend to not start a fic if it's not finished.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914365
Generally a good policy to have, but Personally I love seeing the number on my favourites jump up a bit.

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914369 We all like it when a story updates but I (almost) always have mixed feelings when I see that tiny little number get a little bigger. I can't tell whether to or curl up in a ball and until something else takes my mind off of it, depending on which one has updated.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914380
Good point, but I never want to unfave something because it feels like and insult, so I end up just whittling away at the number.

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914382 I eventually get it all sorted out though, just a pain to reread the ones that don't update for awhile. So usually I end up with a lot to read at the end of the day.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914387
That's not always a bad thing.

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914388 Never said it was. But if you need another editor/proofreader/person to bounce ideas off of don't hesitate to throw me a pm.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914394
Well for 'Equine Vampiris' I can't, because it's not fair to my currant, but if you want, you could look over 'Harmony isn't everywhere'

[Nerow NeighSayer]

I sure will. I'll bump it up my read it later list to get to it sooner.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914404
Awesome, I really appreciate it. There's only one chapter at the moment, but I'm writing the second as we speak.

[Nerow NeighSayer]

914407 Alright, when I get to it I'll let you know.

[The-rogue-shadow]

914425
Sounds good.