Pre-Readers: The Second Coming

Reasons? You want reasons for my pictures?

So... I haven't seen my usual pre-reader on here for a few weeks. I'm sure he has a good reason for disappearing, but this gives me the opportunity to ask if anyone else would be interested in pre-reading for me.

I just finished the sixth chapter of Two Paths, and there are some major plot developments going on there, so I want to make sure it's good before I just shove it out there. Whether you want to go through each sentence with a fine-tooth comb or just want to make a quick check for grammar and spelling, please PM me. I'd be really grateful for the help.