A story idea up for adoption! · 2:45pm Jan 26th, 2013
Okay... So I just came up with a cross-over story idea that I personally think is absolutely brilliant.
And I have to admit. It is rather... Naaauuughtyyyy...
It is actually a rather simple premise.
Rainbow Dash is put into a situation where she and her friends are talking about stuff from
their pasts. Rarity pretty much brings up how Rainbow Dash always flies about, sporting a rather
untamed appearance. It builds up to the point where Rainbow Dash has to tell her friends
a story about why she doesn't like barbers. (Translation: Why she is scared shitless by barbers.)
For those who are familiar with our favorite freaky friend straight from the home for freaky barbers
from our favorite childhood cartoon Courage The Cowardly Dog. I'm sure you know who it is. It's Freaky Fred, Ponified!
So pretty much, it switches out to a story as told from the perspective of Rainbow Dash detailing a little experience she
had when she was a filly. Her parents took her to the local barbershop to get her a much needed trim. Turns out that the barber
is Freaky Fred (duh).
Now this is the basic rule of thumb I imagine for writing this story:
It's told from the perspective of Rainbow Dash, however to make up for it, give a lot of dialogue from Fred
as he shaves her, steadily transitioning his rhyming from something fairly normal into the madness that is well... Fred.
A few things I would hope to see:
- Fred telling the tale of how he shaved Courage similarly to how he did the same during the actual
Courage The Cowardly Dog episode for his other clients.
- Include in Fred's dialogue at some point that he had not originally planned to be "naughty", that is, until he
saw Rainbow's mane in tail.
- Fred shaves her completely bald, including her fur.
And maybe, just maybe... Include Rainbow's friends reactions to the story.
A side thought:
Someone write a version of this story where it's not Rainbow Dash talking about the experience
from when she was a filly. No.
Have it happen in the present, where Rainbow Dash loses a bet against Rarity or something and she
has to see the local barber. And then.. I don't know... Go the whole nine yards! Have Freaky Fred tie
her down in ropes and chains or something to restrain her so he can enjoy the shaving madness!
Dude fred is hilarious. How can he even be the main antagonist? anyway I'm still hoping that someday soon you're story before that fateful night updates. but untill then can only sigh in patience. anyway I could try my hand at the cross over between courage and mlp but I know i'd fail horribly so i'm staying off it. hope you do find some pony that can write it for you though.
cheers
Brilliant! Write it NOW!
I like this concept, It surely is not inept. For someone to adopt this I say to you good-luck, such a familiar face has struck me with a pluck. Indeed this be good, though I smell food, am I in the mood? I'm not sure if I should.