The First Chapter · 3:13am Mar 2nd, 2012
Hey everypony, its me once more saying that my first chapter of my story has a little of mixed reviews by me and another reader. I realize now that I put too much information in the prologue that tells what had happened to everpony else before the events of what is happening now. This is just a plot filler and the real question now is that what had exactly happened to the rest of the mane 6 and what will happen to fluttershy as she fight's this Field Marshal she and her team had fought in the past? My updates to the story may come and go so to whoever is reading this the updates may take awhile. K thanks.