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A Sonnet for Luna · 6:03pm Jan 2nd, 2013

Previous Blog: (A very late) HAPPY NEW YEAR!


If you haven't already, be sure to check my other main works.
~ Equestrian Earth the MMORPG: An epic oddessy of 6 mares and one dragon. All being woven into one story.
~ Blowing Through the Pages: The tale of a seemingly regular pegasus whose invited to join an academy for unicorns.
~ Luna Plays: A playful story of the lovable Princess Luna and her gaming shenanigans.


The cricket, a humble insect, chirps in the night.

Looking for a companion to sing, rest, and sleep with tonight.
In one more place, a firefly burns his passion bright in a warm light.
He minds his own business, in a virtuous manner.
The glowing lights in the expanse of the horizon meant others of his kindred were seeking out others.

The firefly doesn’t mind the yelling and the ruckus they were causing.
But sometimes, the ritual they perceive as bliss of life omits waves of loneliness to him.
His views of life though will undergo a change.

High up in the sky, rested the moon.

Its might was a bright star, glowing fiercely in the night.
The firefly buzzed in wonder, as he speculated this beautiful deity.
Interesting enough, he never considered to look up in his life, not knowing of what will occur to him.
Allured by its charm, the firefly flies up to meet with the moon.

He tries, will all of his might, trying to fly over yonder.
He felt that nothing can obstruct his way between him and the deity.
Oh how he was wrong, as the winds of the sky knocked him off of his path, causing him to fall.
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I look up at the night sky, wondering where you are.

Longing for a moment where I get to spend time you with.
Over doing it, I suppose I am?
Very much, I believe.
Either way, I still want to speak my soul, my burning desire.

Your eyes are blue and deep, yet are brimming with melancholy and gloom.
Others have tried to stop me from being close to you, but I still push on.
Unifying my will, I set off to break your chains.

Luna, I know that I may not mean a lot to you. Perhaps not very much at all, but I have a very honest message from me to you.

I love you.




This poem is a my love for Luna, in the form of a poem written in dedication for her. A lot of you seemed to be upset by my theatrics I've pulled on the night before New Years. So I've decided to prove my loyalty to the NLR. By the means of a poorly written poem. So uh, please don't send me any more hate mail? Either way, it was fun writing it.


Wait, hold on a second. What?
Tis our Nightmare Night costume!
Well, you look very pretty.

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Comments ( 72 )

Is...is that Slender Luna?
:fluttershyouch:

Not bad, chaotic. Not bad at all.

Where do you find you pics?

Y'know I actually had Notepad open writing down all the bold letters. I feel like such a geek. Awful lotta I heart yous and whatnot. Though I'm trying to decode why the I love you's were broken up until the last I love you.... hmmm..... It's detective time. :pinkiesmile: We need more emotes. :applejackunsure:

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On Deviant Art.
This is the group I'm in so that I get daily pictures of Luna.

This is my ever updating favorite folder of Luna pictures.

672528
What?:twilightoops:
Well, I guess Luna has a really slender form.:rainbowwild:

672544
Thanks!:twilightsheepish:

672552
My poem was somewhat was inspired by this style.

Not bad, dude.

In fact, very good. You make Luna happy.

672595
You really need to check where you get your pictures.:twilightoops:
It's Funnyjunk again.

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Thank you! I really don't think highly of my own writing skills. I actually thought the poem was horrible.:twilightblush:

672616
Idk.
:duck:

672629
I know that part.
It says so in the picture's url address.:rainbowkiss:

672624 Well,this poem is pretty good.

Now. Go to Comment Warriors. Find the SBurb sign up. Sign up for it. Please. We still need three people. You will like it.

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Sorry, but I'm kinda busy with a few things.
One of them is mainly EEMMORPG Chapter 10.:twilightblush:

672577 Hrmmm. He kinda stretched it there a bit.

672704
He did, and he executed it beautifully.

The irony of this blog with the new random arena is just perfect. Seriously. I nearly LOL'd for real.

Lovely poem though!

672738 He's Aliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive!

OMG THE FEELS!!!!!!!! :fluttercry: I'm all teary-eyed now! Thanks a lot :rainbowlaugh: It was awesome, much better than I could do.

672986
Oh wow.:twilightoops:
I didn't actually expect to see you here.
This is... awkward.:fluttershysad:

It's so... BEAUTIFUL!!!! :raritycry:

672744
What do you mean "I'm alive"? I never died. I've been here all along!

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Well everybody, I've have officially made Gamer Luna speechless.
She just commented earlier! :twilightoops:

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? And how is it awkward (if you don't mind me asking, that is)? I'm so lost right now....:rainbowhuh:

674678 It appears so! Good luck with that!

674678

Luna is still mine. Pretty sure I have more in common than you! Or at least the user name I use.

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Actually, the ironic part was that I didn't expect Gamer Luna to come on here. Also, Reddened Chaos (another reader of mine) is already in a RP-ing relationship with her. :twilightoops:

674704

I meant the real Luna good sir. Pretty sure she would pick me over you. :raritywink:

674704 well now THIS is awkward~ :D

674704 Tis a pickle you are in. Again, good luck.

674704
Ah, I see. Well I can see a few options you can take. 1) The ever-helpful smoke bomb. 2) Play dead and hope she ignores you (or is that a bear...?) or 3) You could alwaysOHLOOKADISTRACTION! *runs away while you read this*

674632 Was in a frankenstein mood back there.:twilightblush:

674709
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But honestly speaking, the real Luna wouldn't be interested in dating a couple stallions who are wa-a-a-ay younger than her. Plus, she's a princess. A bit out of our league.

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Oh gee, thanks for the support guys.:ajbemused:

675325

Ok, PM for info on Necroesphere. I'm not broadcasting this to the world. Or not. I'll let you figure it out later on in life and laugh about it to myself.

*Sigh*
Here it seems that another commoner thinks that he can be with royalty. It is quite amusing.

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EVERYPONY SPAM 676488 NOW! With comments and private messages! We must overwhelm the arrogant bug!!

Comment posted by Prince Blueblood deleted Jan 4th, 2013

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You peasants are an amusing bunch. I shall see to it, you are all locked up, if this act must continue,

676587
Oh please. You have as much control over the Royal Guards as much as this guy here.
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Me?
I have over 300 people and ponies willing to back me up.

676594
It will be my pleasure..

676587 Oh look. a new test subject. 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lsx4iyXHVf1qfk8y0o1_400.jpg Don't worry, I've been given the go-ahead. It seems many wonder of the effects of neurotoxin on a being that isn't a human. A companion cube will be provided upon completion of the test. And then there will be cake. I hear it's delicious. mopies.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/portal-cake.jpg

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