Choice

Okay every-pony. I have written two different versions of the next chapter of "The Beat of their Hearts." A non clop chapter and a clop chapter. I'll leave the desicion up to you. No matter what you chose the story will progress in the same way I originally intended. Keep in mind I have never written a clop before, so don't expect to much.

Comments

[epicdonus1123 BOT]

Non-clop chapter.

Hands down.

[Lazy Moose]

Clopity clop plz.

[Phoebe Fireworks]

I think that as long as the clop is written with respect for the characters involved, and is in some way meaningful to the story, then by all means, give us the clop version, please. Clop can be quite good if used in appropriate amounts at an appropriate point(s) in the story. Personally, I'm just wary of clop just for the sake of having clop. Also, writing clop takes practice, so you can get some constructive criticism if you intend to try your hand at clop again in the future.

Good god, man, how many times have I said the word clop by now?

[Silentpegasus]

658292 Eight times.

[Kickback]

Hmmmmm....well, maybe clop can wait for the next couple of chapters