Oct
23rd
2024
Spike and the Ninja Turtles · 2:37pm October 23rd
Hey everyone, my name is Wrex and this is my review. Get ready for a iconic meet up. I'm reviewing 'Spike and the Ninja Turtles', a crossover between MLP and 2012 TMNT. In this story, Spike gets displaced from his home thanks to the Kraang and ends up being rescued by the iconic brothers. This story follows the series' script pretty well while alternating for Spike's involvement. I enjoyed the stroll down memory lane of the series. This story shows that secrets have a way of surfacing no matter how deep they're buried, the fight isn't over till it's over, and family is a blessing. Aside from some grammatical errors, incorrect spelling, and profanity, I enjoyed this story. I give it a 8.5 out of 10.
Thank you so much for this review! This story was one of the first ones that's helped me with growing as a writer, not only is it one of the longest story's I have. But It was one of the first few story's that I've been making that really helps me grow more as a writer with longer chapters and a deeper story, I was still figuring out how to properly write story's like this since I was only 2 months or so into being a writer. While I do plan on updating the grammar so it's more accurate to how I do thing's now, I'm glad you really enjoyed the story, it's not perfect, everyone makes slip ups here and there, and I know some people don't like it, which I can understand, I'm glad so many other people have enjoyed it since I first posted it, thanks so much for the review!
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No problem, buddy