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  • 15 weeks
    Brainstorm notes

    I was cleaning up my notes and came across my brainstorm for The Weed Killers and figured I share it in the small chance anypony would be interested. I updated this as I was writing it. Since I was a on limited time crunch, I wasn't entirely sure how I was even going to end the story when I started it. But, I often find it's easiest to just start with a grain of an idea and let the story

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  • 33 weeks
    An analysis of the Italian Nursery Rhyme from Ch 9

    Excuse me while I nerd out about that Italian nursery rhyme from Chapter Nine.

    Cavallino arri, arrò,
    prendi la biada che ti do,
    prendi i ferri che ti metto
    per andare a San Francesco.
    A San Francesco c’è una via
    che ti porta a casa mia.
    A casa mia c’è un altare
    con tre monache a lavorare,
    una cuce, una taglia,
    una fa cappelli di paglia;
    la più piccola e vecchietta

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  • 34 weeks
    Well, this is embarrassing

    EDIT: Ch 8 is published again!

    I temporarily unpublished Chapter eight of A Tail of Two Ponies until I can work out with a mod how stringent a particular rule is, and how to adapt said chapter if I did violate said rule.

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  • 35 weeks
    Looking for Editors!

    Any(pony) wants to try their (hoof) at giving the chapters I have published a solid look through for spelling, grammar, style, and plot consistency? Though, I would like to have someone proofread chapters before I publish them, so they can be more polished.

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  • 36 weeks
    Thank you

    I have no idea what I'm doing. I have an option to make a blog, so I guess I should use it?

    We have cover art for A Tail of Two Ponies, now, thanks to the wonderful QuixoticPirates, though it wasn't initially intended to be cover art, it's more than satisfactory.

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Aug
20th
2024

Brainstorm notes · 9:13pm August 20th

I was cleaning up my notes and came across my brainstorm for The Weed Killers and figured I share it in the small chance anypony would be interested. I updated this as I was writing it. Since I was a on limited time crunch, I wasn't entirely sure how I was even going to end the story when I started it. But, I often find it's easiest to just start with a grain of an idea and let the story take control.

(Side note: Ch 20 of A Tail of Two Ponies will be released soon.) It's out now!

"The wrong pony for the job"

1. "Two PoVs that run concurrently."
2. "Experiment with the form."
3. "Story told as a collection of works in-universe."


Split idenities?
How do you experiment for a contest? Just go wild with my incomplete sentences? Emojis?

Pony DnD Adventurer

Doesn’t want to be there
Girly and docile goals- gardener? Maid? Housewife? Animal Caretaker? Painter?


Telepathy to cheat on the topics?

Satire character tropes?



Pony at a job board


Scoundrel pony- Perfect Pick
Girl pony- Purple?
Muscle pony-
Mage pony-
Hero pony-

If we have Gardener’s story told by some pony else, what is the point? Why does it improve the story? It doesn’t. Is there a way I can make it improve the story?

Why is this here…

I can make it a series of vignettes… What if it’s Gardener listening to the stories?

Imagining herself doing the job? Telling foals how she first got the job?

What if I try each one at a time. Two POV- Gardener and? I keep running back to some pony reading about Gardener. But why? Why are they reading about her?


Gardener- Purple Carnation

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