Short version is, in better keeping with the Fallout crossover theme, I adjusted the year the bombs fall in Renewal from 1067 to 1077.Very Minor Chapter 46 Edit Due To Dumb Brain ;) · 3:53pm Jun 4th, 2023
Hey all, not a big whoop or anything but I know how a lot of you have steel traps for detail and figured this quick edit might be worth a mention. I'm in the process of writing the new chapter still, and of course I've run into an unavoidable moment where it's necessary to mention who's carrying around what. In doing so, it occurred to me that I had lost track of whether or not Roach still had his set of saddlebags that he and Ginger had received at the end of their expedition into the hardened bunker beneath the Stable-Tec Headquarters crater site.
Turns out, he does! Which is a detail that kiiind of slipped my mind since right after the two reached the surface the entire story shifted into a concerted search for Aurora in Fillydelphia. I might need to take a run back through Chapters 37-ish and 40 to make sure I didn't have a brain fart and disappear those bags. Long story short, I dug into the previous chapter and spliced in what I think is a nice and unobtrusive mention within the opening Aurora scene that the saddlebags Ginger had been given are still in her compartment, and while looking through Ginger's notes about her in Teak's journal, mentions that she shifted the contents of Ginger's bags into her own. Bing bang boom that's a spicy meatball.
So, yeah! That's probably more important for me to be telling you than it is for you to be hearing from me, haha.
TL;DR I sneaky-sneaky modified a couple lines in the last chapter to confirm Aurora has the contents of Ginger's saddlebags with her, and Roach is in fact wearing the Stable-Tec Field Support bags that Applebloom gave them back in 2022. :)
Also the next chapter is going to be... chunky. So, ah, prepare for that. I'm sorry. XD
Continuity patching! Wheee!
Considering most of your recent chapters over the past year have been 30-40 thousand words apiece, I shudder to think what you consider to be "chunky" O.o
But, hey; updates of both quality and quantity? By all means, post away!
Still haven't gotten to that chapter yet (Sorry!), but thanks for your work on the story. :)
"That's probably more important for me to be telling you than it is for you to be hearing from me, haha."
Hah, aye, I know how that is! :D
(Oh, and sorry if I missed any errors related to this.)
"Also the next chapter is going to be... chunky. So, ah, prepare for that. I'm sorry. XD"
...Oh. Well. ...I'll get to it eventually, fate willing. :D