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Muggonny


Use words wisly, for they are limited ~ Legacy [02:10]

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  • 5 weeks
    Pink Scorch #2 IS OUT

    TNo, I Don't Want to Face Overwhelming Odds (I Just Want to Sleep)
    A band known as Underlord performs a series of black magic rituals in the form of rock concerts in an attempt to summon a primordial deity. Pink Scorch will stop them for $6.50.
    Muggonny · 13k words  ·  26  0 · 225 views

    GO READ!!!

    GO UPVOTE IT!!!

    HELP PROMOTE IT IDK I JUST WANT IT TO PERFORM BETTER THAN THE FIRST FIC.

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  • 6 weeks
    Pink Scorch #2 - Action Preview

    Pink Scorch stepped forth just as the beast, much like herself, took on a new form. Its body had a weird egg-shape with stout legs. When it turned to face her, four iridescent eyes glowered at her. It opened a ring-shaped mouth, revealing rows upon rows of teeth, and its tongue shot out. 

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  • 7 weeks
    Scary stuff going on rn

    The part of Texas that I live in is currently experiencing the 2nd worst wildfire disaster, and growing. Over 850,000 acres have been burned, and several towns/cities close to me have been evacuated. The fire's spread slowed down, just as it was about to hit a neighboring city, although an entire subdivision was forced to evacuate.

    The fire is visible from my hometown.

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    0 comments · 87 views
  • 8 weeks
    SHINING ARMOR IS A TERRIBLE DAD - 2024 COMPETITION

    Shining Armor is a Terrible Dad
    2024 Competition

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    6 comments · 562 views
  • 8 weeks
    So, where's Pink Scorch #2?

    Hey there! February is almost over, and I said before that I will be releasing the new Pink Scorch by the end of the month. This will be a multi-chapter story with a fully developed plot and new characters. So, what's the progress on it?

    Around 7,000 words.

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    1 comments · 103 views
Mar
20th
2023

Changeling Theory - Straw Poll · 6:38pm Mar 20th, 2023

I've been working on my mental health a lot lately, and have gotten to where I feel a little more comfortable writing again. There's one small issue, though: Changeling Theory hasn't been updated in months!

I'm hard at work on the next chapter with a solid fourteen pages written. I'm having to move very slow with it because it's setting up for lots of action, but I have enough content written to make up a full chapter. HOWEVER, the original plan was that it would be a single, long chapter with a heavy focus on build-up.

This is where the choice is yours. Should I release what I have written now so that more content is being put out, or are you fine with waiting longer for a much bigger chapter with lots of build-up and more intense action?

Vote here.

Report Muggonny · 130 views · Story: Changeling Theory ·
Comments ( 1 )

Haven't read the story, but it's in my Watch Later. (Probably should spend some time to read another story to heat the iron, as it were)

Longer chapters can sometimes drag on, and depending on the build-up, it could slow the pacing to a crawl. Splitting chapters into parts can sometimes work out if it's an extended singular event, or you could make it one extravaganza of a chapter from start to finish. I've seen both styles work well: One chapter of build-up, one chapter of nonstop action. Or simply one long chapter that ends in the action sequence.

It again depends on how much of each there is. If there's a lot of setup and a far shorter amount of action, maybe keeping it as one long chapter is preferable. If they are about equal in length, splitting them could be worthwhile. Give the readers the book before the sword.

Really depends on your preference and the content of the chapter(s).

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