Another Edit to Fate of the Legion · 7:01pm Feb 1st, 2023
Hey guys,
Well this story has probably been one I've made the most edits on with the suggestions. A couple people felt the second ending I gave was bordering on murder. So I took a suggestion to change it to have Cozy not be killed directly by the young 6 and have her instead fall to her death after getting her wing burned by Smolder and grabbing on the ledge. Ocellus tried to offer her a helping hoof but she refuses and lets go. Kind of like the original planned ending for Zira that was scrapped for being too dark. But since this story version is called the dark one its probably good.
That would actually makes more since