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Poke-A-Dot


Account created May 26, 2014. Formerly known as PinkKoala.

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  • 51 weeks
    My First Lesbian Crush (in real life)

    Back in 2014, I had my first lesbian crush. Before that, I don't remember having a crush on many people. My first lesbian crush happened in 2014 and I liked a girl who was one year older than me. Her name was Elvina, and she spoke fluent Russian. She also had blonde hair and grey eyes.

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  • 76 weeks
    In The Lab

    “You’re awkward, you’re asocial, and even though we celebrated you joining the mathletes and the chess club because we’ve gone undefeated for years, you never became part of our group. I sometimes say things like ‘you should try not speaking in public’ not out of malice, but— but because I want you to be part of the group. I want you to open up to us, to laugh and smile and celebrate and

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  • 76 weeks
    Reviewing Labcoat

    I don’t want you to go to CHS,” Sugarcoat clarified. She pushed herself from the door frame but stayed standing in the doorway itself, blocking any exit. Her face dropped.

    I interpret this as Sugarcoat representing Twilight Sparkle's subconscious and her conscience.

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  • 77 weeks
    Short sweet story about a friendship and romance

    The story

    I personally liked this story a lot. In my own personal experiences though, letting someone take your hand is a lot better than just grabbing their hand, but that might be getting too much into my offline personal life.

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Nov
3rd
2022

Friendship Games Fanfiction Review · 9:44am Nov 3rd, 2022

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Link to the story here

Here, she leveled a disappointed look at Cinch. "When Sombra was offered the job at Everfree University, he picked you as his replacement. When I questioned him as to your ability and intent, he promised me that you were a fantastic administrator, and that you would continue the traditions behind the Games. I regret to say, it seems his assurances were misplaced. You have taken the Friendship Games and turned them into a ruthless tournament that you are determined to win year after year, despite the lack of tangible reward."

I must saw. This is one of the stand outs in this story. Interested to see more world building around the idea of King Sombra working as a university administrator.

The look Faust gave Cinch in return could have served as a level. "Because despite my own feelings on the matter, you are mostly free to run Crystal Prep as you please. If I took you to task for simply ignoring traditions set by your predecessor, I'd be taken to task myself for abuse of power." Her gaze sharpened. "Unfortunately for you, prior to these Games, I received proof that you were doing more than simply being a ruthless taskmistress."

Interesting to see where the world building can happen here. Does Principal Cinch remain bound to just working at Crystal Prep, like the villains in the original My Little Pony series? Does she apply to it like a regular job in the human world? Curious to see how this turns out.

All in all, some interesting lines about seeking revenge and also wreaking havoc in the lives of those who hurt you.

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