The G3 slice of life comedy continues. Featuring Derpy being Derpy and a sneezy breezie (and her friends)!

‘Magic beans. Magic Beans! Where does Kimono keep her magic beans?’

“Achoo!” exclaims a tulip. “Achoo!”

“Bless… you?”

Ocean examines it, curiously.

Kimono grins, her eyes hooded, looking slightly maniacal. She pulls her leather chair round next to Derpy.

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EDelivering on Sweetness & Beyond

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

When Derpy and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a parallel dimension of sweet and innocent ponies, things go awry, and Ocean Mist, protégé of Kimono, learns a lesson as she overcomes her limitations to help them out

• Crossover
• Derpy

abrony-mouse · 16k words · 172 views

The cute, slice of life comedy is finally done! Delivering on Sweetness & Beyond was very sweet to write. Thanks so much to the G3 pony crowd in a certain server for their help and support

“Any ideas?” Derpy asks.

“Yes. Miss—”

Crafty begins.

“Shh! She’s thinking,” Derpy interrupts.

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I arrange my writing into both an overall palette as well as a palette for each scene. I call it a palette because I draw on each part of it when writing up my plan for each scene, a bit like a paint palette (and I use it to inform my plans for the writing)

Palette
Character
Place (lore)
Genre
Relationship
*Pink theme
Senses
Emotional interest
Emotional conflict –
Practical conflict-
Images
**Meta

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EDelivering on Sweetness & Beyond

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

When Derpy and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a parallel dimension of sweet and innocent ponies, things go awry, and Ocean Mist, protégé of Kimono, learns a lesson as she overcomes her limitations to help them out

• Crossover
• Derpy

abrony-mouse · 16k words · 172 views

The slice of life comedy, set in G3/G4, continues! Introducing a large stable of new ponies, including Wysteria and Starcatcher.

“Of course! Sky Wishes and Starcatcher! They have magic!”

Starcatcher and Sky Wishes were known to grant wishes.

Wysteria waves the little filly off. As she turns back to her pumpkin patch, though, the confused look returns.

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