a problem with the 2nd chapter · 5:38pm Mar 18th, 2021
I have, a problem. I am not sure how I feel about what I have done for chapter 2, I like certain aspects of it, but at the same time, I really dont like it and I am unsure if I should keep it or start again.
below is the section i am bothered by, feel free to give your opinion on if it is worth keeping or not. may not even be how the story goes yet.