I have just re-wrote the first chapter because I noticed the mistakes and I was annoyed by the fact that it is gonna annoy some people. You can read it if you want to understand chapter 2 a lot more (Sorry about it). The chapter 2 will come in after some hours. It is the time zone's fault.
Although I might upload it after few hours if I encounter less problems with it.
Anyways I am still writing it and I am doing my best!
no problem, and while it dose have its mistakes, it also has good potential. all you need to do is refine it and you will have a great story on you're hands
>>244546
no problem! i'v been waiting for along time for it to come out, after reading aPS, so its great to finally see it here.
Thanks for your continued support by faving Deja Discord.
thanks for the favorite zzzena hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters
>>138539
Oh thank you for reading it!
The line spacing annoyed me too.
The update's progress is at like 60-70% because I was getting interrupted as well. (not you of course)
But I might be able to upload it soon. I don't know much though.
It might just need some hours for my friend to check it as well.
And I say that the chapter is getting written good and okay.
But I have noticed that my time zone sucks. So you will have to wait like 8 hours or something.
Sorry about that.
>>138483
i just read the updated chapter, and i have to say its much better!
it still has some gramatical errors, but thats just me being picky. i cant wait for the update to get here!
>>138478
I have just re-wrote the first chapter because I noticed the mistakes and I was annoyed by the fact that it is gonna annoy some people. You can read it if you want to understand chapter 2 a lot more (Sorry about it). The chapter 2 will come in after some hours. It is the time zone's fault.
Although I might upload it after few hours if I encounter less problems with it.
Anyways I am still writing it and I am doing my best!
Thanks again for favorite and watch!
>>138216
no problem, and while it dose have its mistakes, it also has good potential. all you need to do is refine it and you will have a great story on you're hands
Thanks for the favorite! I am sure you noticed some mistakes as well. I was just fixing it. The next chapter will be out today.
Thanks for the fav on Researcher Twilight! Knowing that there's people out there that like it will help motivate me to continue with the story.