The REAL Chapter 7 · 9:13pm
So the real chapter 7 is out, the nonupdated version is gone, and the fully edited(not fully) copy is out. We fixed the issues that plagued it, and it's out. Nothing happened still, though.
So the real chapter 7 is out, the nonupdated version is gone, and the fully edited(not fully) copy is out. We fixed the issues that plagued it, and it's out. Nothing happened still, though.
Twinkleshine has had a crush on Twilight since they were both fillies. With the help of Moondancer, will she finally be able to overcome her lingering doubts and fears and ask Twilight out? And, if she does, what then?
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Co-written with Cuttincows, but submitted on mine because you can't co-own a story.
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cuttincows
Better cover art incoming, Cuttincows can't draw chins for flank.
Twilight loses something great to her. She feels being alone will fix that, so she decides to do that. But, what happens when she gets lonely?
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I wrote this over three days, it's a oneshot sad fic. My first sad fic, so let me know how good it is.
Alpha Bit was an ITpony, a relatively new field in ponykind. He spent his existence fixing computers in Canterborough, never even glancing towards a mare, before he was called to help make sure that all the technology ran smoothly in the Royal Wedding. There, he meets Twilight Sparkle, the mare of his dreams.
Omega bad a bit of a crush on Princess Luna. But, considering that he lived with Alpha on the edge of the kingdom, he had little chance. Spending his days admiring Luna from afar, and programming the computers Alpha fixed, he tagged along to the wedding as Alpha's assistant. There he meets Luna again.
Will the two ponies be able to get the mares of their dreams? Or is this just a fable they thought up one day? More importantly, why is Alpha eating macaroni for breakfast?
Starting out as a fairly normal day, graduation from Magic School means Twilight will no longer have to send friendship reports to the Princess. Things go amazing, but, slowly, they topple into an adventure and a problem so large it will change the face of Equestria forever. The Mane 6 will have to deal with love, violence, vengeance, and more.
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The story was cancelled, but I'm leaving this up for historical purposes. I plan on rewriting from scratch with a different style. It's going to be the same story, same characters, but with a different narrative I'm better at, and a new title. While this is going to stay up, and it's by no means short, I'm just going to start over. It has a LOT of problems, and the vast majority would be fixed with a complete rewrite.
I'm the most stupid being on this planet!
I just forgot to publish the story!
I'm so dumb!
Ungh!
It's published now. Sorry for the mess.
It's knife time. Finally!
Password is still fireball.
Yeah, I'm slapping myself in the face for being such an idiot right now and afterwards I'll crawl in my bed, pull the blankets over my head and am ashamed.
Bronydragon
>>116353
I don't know if this will help now, but if not, I'm just submitting this piece of literature.
There!
Bronydragon
>>114733
Still zero words. Just email it to me or throw it in Google Docs and link me that
>>114593
Set up a password. It's fireball and I'm now using it for all of my stories! Maybe help me a bit with the tagging and the description. Not really good at this. I'm from Germany so *blub*
Bronydragon
>>112983
Still says zero, but I think it's because you either haven't published it, or didn't put a password on it. Try both
>>112671
Hmm that doesn't make any sense. When I'm clicking the link there are 1624 words in total. Just try again. Now it has to be there.
Bronydragon
>>112447
Just saying, 0 words total.
But I tracked it
>>112054
Guess what? It's knife time.
Haven't set up any password, so enjoy and say if you liked the prologue. Tried to make his background believeable.
Bronydragon
>>111362
Alright, sweet.
>>111098
So what? It's good. That's what counts.
Just read your pm and I can't believe it. You're normally not in Hie, but would read mine?
You can't see this, but I'm crying tears of joy right now.
Bronydragon