Forget it... · 12:17am
Sorry, everyone. But really, I can't think of anything to do with this story. I have mulled it over in the noggin for a few weeks now, and I can't get it to flow correctly. It seems a bit cliche when it comes out on the paper (erm... Screen?), and I just can't get it to sound like i'd want. If only there were a way to put thoughts into a video file and have it not look like it did when they last tested it, I would then love to show you guys what I am thinking of. I have a whole story in my head of how it would look, including a particular one of me hearing a scream in the forest I mentioned from At my Doorstep, and me going to check it out. I come to find out that it was Rarity, flung out of a hole beneath a tree she fell into back in Equestria. I can even see the land from the hole where she fell from, and I can see the rest of the Mane 6 looking through the hole at Rarity and I. (I may make this into a story.) What would happen is i'd be able to pass between here and Equestria at will, the same as for them. I'd explore there, and they would here. Best of all is when we go back to my house, I scare the hell out of my Dad and Brother with the help of Pinkie. From there I think I would steer it to where I take them to my school, and they are miraculously accepted and liked there. (Except for a few exceptions.) I would also let them know I was a brony and tell them of the fandom and show, albeit with a few twists. (Something like: It was an accurate guess! or "We always thought something like that existed, but never thought it would be so accurate!")
TL;DR, Abandoning At my Doorstep (no shame in that, right?) and possibly picking up on another story idea. Go ahead and use AmD if you want to continue it, but I must employ a few requests/forbiddings: 1) DO NOT turn it into a romance or shipping. I can't handle that. 2) No violence. If you are even thinking about this, do not use the story. 3) If you have the family coming back home and freaking out/kicking them out, do not do it. I can't handle that. If you want to continue this at all, please at least keep it on a respectable and realistic tangent.