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I need somepony to give me some advice on my story.
Like certain areas I can improve on.
I really have no clue as to what I could do since i'm a novice writer but the story is setting there glaring at me to be changed, but i'm not sure what I could do to change it.
any advice is welcome.
Latest Stories Luna begins to feel the walls of separation, begin to once again close in on her, but on this occasion will she be able to beat back the darkness or will she fall prey to the nightmare that is her possessed self.
criticizism is very much welcomed
Literally my first short story ever so please be blunt but not to harsh. .
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Thank you so much for the Fave of Shine!
Didn't know you had a story, now I feel yet another must be read!
>>26316
To be perfectly honest, I'm not actually "popular" at all....
Well, I don't think so anyways.
>>26314
Yes 3, it's hard to be as popular as you!
But I have many aquatints who I have conversations with. But few I have on regular occasion, talk to.
>>26313
Lol.
And oh? Three people eh?
>>26311 Your round about question (?) makes pinkie's head hurt!
Yes a friends list would be something I would enjoy.
*Looks at the 3 people I talk to on a common bases, profiles*
Lol. I'm watching you watching me watching myself....?
Too bad there's no friend's list here. D:
*Stalks* Oh snap. Same person from World of Tanks! *Screams....Then faints*
Hello there! Thanks for the fav on my story "Luna, There's a Sentient Race Inside Your Mane."
-BGB