I just re-wrote chapter one completely. It's a whole new thing. Give it a read if you like weird things.
The old chapter one is archived in a blog post.
T_T pls update pls i beg you
Soooo... any updates on how the next chapter is coming?
Your still alive right? Still waiting for you to finish CV:C :P
Hey, thanks for the favorite on Discipline & Pleasure! More to come this month!
I'm really stuck on that chapter. I wrote two other things while I was trying to figure out how to go about it. The twilight / rarity thing (of which I stole some scenes from the failed chapter) and the re-write of chapter one. At this rate, I'm gonna re-write chapter 6 before I get to writing chapter 8. And chapter six does need a re-write. Every time I write it, I get about a quarter of the way through and decide to scrap it and start over. I'm also not spending as much time, as I've said in my other posts, so this means its taking for freaking ever. How do I Rarity? Seriously. I'm tempted to just mix her in with the last few chapters, because I'm actually excited about those as opposed to stressing over this one. Why can't I just not care like I used to? Damned drive to be somewhat good at things.
I wanna see what happens in CV: C its been FOREVER
god damn i really like your writing
just so you know
i hope you update something soon
Sorry! I just haven't had the time to write lately. I pretty much have caught up on my reading list, but my life lately has been hectic.
I've gone from having too much free time (4-24 hours a day) to not nearly enough (0-1 hour a day). My work has gotten more time consuming (but hey, pay raise), I have more friends to attend to in my personal life, my girlfriend is spending more time with me (also a good thing) and I'm in two new gaming groups. One of which I've been DMing for. DMing sucks up my free time like a vacuum. Any time I have free time, it needs to go to world building and story lining for that. I just haven't had the time to write any of my dirty pony stories.
I do plan on finishing CV:C at the very least. I also had a ton more things to write about, but I'm channeling some of them into the campaign I've been running. One thing I wanted to do was an adventure story for Bon-Bon, but season 3 episodes 1 and 2 kinda did a story similar enough to mine that I lost motivation for writing it. So I've been throwing elements from that into my campaign. Poor Bon-Bon. She really needs some adventure.
I'm not sure when I'll write another chapter. I can't promise it will be soon, and I can't promise it will be far away. I could get a surprise day of time somewhere and just write one. I do things like that sometimes. I could have a cancelled game day for instance. Then I'd have a whole day where I was going to be running a campaign to myself. And I'd be caught up with my campaign stuff, so I could take the time to write whatever I please.
I love writing, I love weird dirty stories, and I love ponies. I will get around to it. Feel free to PM me for things or post here. I log in sporadically throughout the week when I can.
Wassup dude, why are you stopping ? D:
Your clop has given me nightmares and have made me more paranoid at night than I already am.
It's ... Beautiful...