So I was 'pressured' by Seleendria to post my story to Equestria Daily... And I just got my email back. Now, I had my doubts about it being good enough for EqD... and I was right. But... I never expected how close it is to being ready for Equestria Daily... My only issues are grammatical, and fixing the slight amount of telling both me and Seleendria missed... There were no complaints about the story itself. And considering that this is quite literally not only my first pony fanfic, but my first fanfic ever, I am just like.... wow.
So thank you, Hacker-Warrior, for your help with keeping this story moving,
Thank you, Seleendria, for helping me edit to the point where it is now,
And Thank you. For taking the time read, and hopefully enjoy, Dark Reality.
I will be making several fixes over the next for days to 'Dark Reality' and hopefully soon I will get to the point where I will have something good enough to submit again.