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User ID: 28,331
Registered: 23rd Apr 2012
Last Seen: 1d, 16h ago
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Hi! I'm 15 16, male, and I live in England. I have decided to put my writing to a test in this fine community. I am also a frequent purveyor of Tvtropes, god help me. Currently I have a two stories going, the first being 'Enlightening Circumstances', which I am fairly proud of it for a first fic, and the reviews are mainly positive, so I would appreciate it if you did look at it and comment. Even if you don't like it, I could always use some advice!

My second story is part of the 'Chess Games of the Gods' universe, a fantastic 'Multi-Author story' that was started by Rust and expanded on by Blackwing. I personally think that this one is the better of my two stories, especially seeing as my editor, BrilliantPoint, had a huge hand in correcting any mistakes, be they grammar or plot related, that it had, for which I am immeasurably grateful for.

You can look at my blog for news/excuses for why my stories aren't updating, and occasional poetry. Because who doesn't love poetry?

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I'm terribly sorry about that pun. Don't hurt me. But it's snowing here! Anyone else have snow?

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Poison Fangs and Scaly Tails

Set in the "Chess Game of the Gods" universe. Approved by Blackwing.

"Scales" He said. Daniel really should have been less vague. Now, thanks to a two headed god of choice he met in an internet cafe, he's stuck in Equestria a very unusual form. Oh, scales he got, though. Scales in abundance. Along with killer eyes and venomous fangs. Will he cope with being one of Equestria's deadliest animals? And how will the ponies react to it? I think you know how to find out...

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Enlightening Circumstances

After a magical spell gone wrong  (God, another?)  Twilight inadvertantly summons a strange creature to Equestria. The creature is different than it remembers, with wings and a newfound aptitude for electromagic. Is there something sinister behind the change? And when the time comes, will the creature wield it's powers for Equestria? Or against it? And just what are Spellblooms, anyway?

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#501770 · 1d, 17h ago · · ·
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In fact, feel free to start editing now. Provided you have the time; and aren't stuck doing exams, of course. Go as far as it says to, the chapter is still under construction, but since I'm doing exams at the moment, nothing new will pop up for a while.

#387359 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>387318

Seems rather indecisive. If you get something up and running, my username is the_thoughtful.

#387318 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>387276 Well...I'm not sure. I had skype on my old laptop, so I have an account but...

#387276 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·
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Uh... do you have Skype?

#370118 · 10w, 11h ago · · ·
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>>370080 Hmm, very well. I shall take your advice into consideration!

#370080 · 10w, 11h ago · · ·
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>>369948

Hmm...

I'm not sure what perspective you're going to continue this for now, but perhaps try to keep up character development and some additional minor conflicts?

#369948 · 10w, 12h ago · · ·
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>>367660 You should probably curse me. Hours, wasted...

And thanks to you, I am looking through Enlightening Circumstances and attempting to improve it, and perhaps I will finish the new chapter...Do you have anything to say on how to improve it?

#367660 · 10w, 1d ago · · ·
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I read Enlightening Circumstances, it's not half bad so far; loved the awkward comedy in the most recent chapter. But imagine my surprise when one word told me the MC was the opposite gender than I imagined.

Also, thanks to you, I'm now looking through TVTropes. Not sure whether to thank you or curse you. Take your pick.

#367393 · 10w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>367232 Heh, not even recently. It was on November the 20th. I am just that disorganised and forgot to change it.:twilightsheepish:

#367232 · 10w, 2d ago · · ·
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*looks at your bio*

Birthday recently?

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