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User ID: 1,924
Registered: 10th Oct 2011
Last Seen: 2d, 21m ago
Story views: 41,570

I am also one of the more experienced reviewers over at Ponychan's Training Grounds thread. I've reviewed over 50 stories, and have gotten quite a few on EqD. Stop by if you'd like to get some story advice from one of our reviewers!

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And since July 2012, I've been a pre-reader for Equestria Daily. Questions about EqD or the pre-reading process? Feel free to ask here or here.

Serious Stories

[Romance] [Sad] [Slice of Life]
Big Mac helps Derpy through the fight of her life, but will their love survive the aftermath?
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[Sad] [Slice of Life]
Pinkie Pie discovers that breaking the fourth wall isn't all it it's cracked up to be.
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[Sad] [Slice of Life]
Applejack enjoys her family's Mother's Day tradition
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[Sad] [Slice of Life]
Rainbow Dash shares a painful moment from her past with Scootaloo
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Not-So-Serious Stories

[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
Spike has entirely too much fun writing
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[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
The Mane 6 win a day cruise, and everything is ship-shape. Or not.
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[Romance] [Sad] [Dark] [Comedy] [Random] [Slice of Life]
Random unrelated short stories
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Empty Queue! · 3:42am

Never thought I'd see this happen, but the review queue for Ponychan's Training Grounds thread is empty! I've been a reviewer there for 9 months and helped a lot of writers. Anyone who'd like some story advice is welcome there, and wait times will be very short, for now at least. Of course, anyone willing to try their hand at reviewing is welcome as well, though we're not currently short on assistance.

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Latest Stories


Tales of Interest!

Taking a cue from the thoroughly enjoyable Miyajima, this is a storehouse for short tales that don't warrant being separate.

Sweet Temptation [Comedy][Slice of Life]: Dinky Doo matches wits with a worthy muffin opponent.  Written for a d'aww fic contest with a 1k word limit.  This has 999.  Yah!

The following 6 were written for a microfic contest here, here, and here:

In Need of Healing [Sad][Slice of Life]: Sometimes Nurse Redheart is the one who could use a little care. prompt = Whispers in the dark. Finished 2nd of 32, won Judges' Pick.

The Voice of Reason [Slice of Life]: Somehow, Dinky always knows just what to say. prompt = Whispers in the dark. Finished 4th of 32, won Readers' Pick Runner-Up.

At Close of Day [Slice of Life]: Luna has a conversation with an old acquaintance. prompt = Whispers in the dark. Tied for 7th of 32, won Judges' Pick Runner-Up.

To Those Who Wait [Romance][Slice of Life]: Twilight takes romance into her own

hooves. Maybe she didn't need to. prompt = Not what it looks like. Tied for 7th of 32.

Playing Dress-Up [Slice of Life]: Rarity wishes her friends knew how much of herself she puts into her creations for them. prompt = Not what it looks like. Tied for 10th of 32.

A Tight Spot [Comedy][Slice of Life]: Something strange is going on with Applejack. prompt = Not what it looks like. Tied for 10th of 32.

The following 3 were from the same contest, but written under a different name.

Absolutely Anonymous [Slice of Life][Comedy]  Spike's having a little too much fun writing those shipfics. prompt = Not what it looks like. Finished 3rd of 32.

The Night Watch [Silce of Life] Sometimes Miss Smarty Pants is the one who looks after Twilight. prompt = Whispers in the Dark. Finished 9th of 32.

Treehouse of Horror [Dark] Something seems off about Fluttershy's home tonight. prompt = Not what it looks like. Finished 12th of 32.

The following 2 were entries from  Ponychan's /fic/ mini write-off #1. Prompt = What lies beneath.

Teacher's Pet [Slice of Life][Sad] A good teacher shouldn't play favorites. Finished 3rd of 36

Canon [Slice of Life] Derpy really likes Octavia's music. Finished 10th of 36.

The following 2 were entries from Ponychan's /fic/ mini write-off #2. Prompt = The price of a dream.

Perchance [Slice of Life][Sad] Derpy Hooves, star athlete. Finished 2nd of 38.

A Sister's Pride [Slice of Life] Applejack just might be the one most looking forward to the day Apple Bloom gets her cutie mark. Finished 9th of 38.

This was from another of Tactical's minific contests here and here.

Luck of the Draw [Slice of Life][Sad] Derpy always loves attending the Summer Sun Celebration, and it's her year to shine. Prompt=And They Danced. Finished 1st of 12.

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A New Harmony

Twilight Sparkle has defeated Discord, but she lacked the discipline to do a proper job of it.  He's ready for a rematch, but he's recruited three ponies to be his unwitting minions, and nopony will know he's behind it until it's too late.  Everypony is in for some serious mind games.

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But You Surpass Them All

"Strong" is definitely a word that describes the Apples, and their family bonds are one of their biggest strengths. But Applejack will need to show her vulnerable side to get the most out of this day.

With her friends' help and a few cracks in her armor, Applejack is going to make this Mother's Day the best one yet.

Cover art by Conicer

Thanks to Cassius, Filler, Corejo, Uma, Dublio, and Compendium of Steve for reviews/feedback.

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Nom de Plume

Spike would like to indulge in a little late-night storytelling. If he could just get a little bit of privacy, he might churn out his masterwork. A sharp quill, a bottle of ink, and a head full of ideas. If only that owl would mind his own business.

Thanks to Uma for rough draft feedback.

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Author, Author!

Much to her surprise, Pinkie Pie has discovered that the pen is a mighty tool, indeed. When she first tried her hoof at writing, she had no idea what the consequences might be. Now, more is at stake than she ever could have imagined.

Now on Equestria Daily!

Revised version of the third-place winner in /fic/ write-off #3 here and here.

"Author, author!" is often shouted by appreciative audiences at the premiere of a musical or play when the writer is known to be in attendance and they wish him to take a bow with the cast.

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#381197 · 8w, 4d ago · · ·
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I just read on Chris' blog that you helped me out on A Door Jam a while back.  Were you the person who read it from PonyChan?  In any event, I wanted to say thanks.  I've learned a tremendous amount from working and re-working that story and everyone along the way has been a big help.  Thanks, again!

#195560 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>195557

Of course. "A Cup of Joe" is one of the few stories on my favorites list.

#195557 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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Hi Pasco! Thanks for the Watch! I'll do my best to deserve it!:twilightsmile:

#194823 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>194685 >>193496

Heh. I don't use watch like most people do. Since I rarely read anything, I can't use notification of new stories. Mostly, I'd been keeping it as a list of people who can best be contacted through FiMFiction PM, but lately figured I should add some people as recommended writers in case anyone cares about my opinion on that.

#194685 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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'Bout damn time. :|

#193496 · 26w, 2d ago · · ·
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>mfw you JUST started watching me an i didn't even notice before

#101611 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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#101546 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>100979

It's alright. It's one of the most-read fics on this site, coming up on 22k views. It was widely circulated around local brony communities, so a lot of the readers weren't users of this site and couldn't vote or leave comments. Glad you enjoyed it!

#100979 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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i honestly dont see why "my funny sister" doesnt have at least 700 thumbs up

what a beautiful bittersweet story :pinkiesad2:

#100898 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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You need more followers.

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