Nov
1st
2014
Editing old chapters · 1:15am Nov 1st, 2014
If you're reading my story, I'll first apologize for not writing as often as I used to. The rating has been good but among the comments have also been complaints about the story feeling rushed and lacking dialogue. I'm still writing the new chapter, but it has become clear to me that the first several chapters do not measure up to that same quality, chiefly the dialogue. Showing, not telling. Samuel's first person narative might not have been a wise choice but I'll keep working with it rather
