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Revision · 10:13pm Feb 9th, 2013

I haved revised the latest chapter of The Incident. I felt that the ending could have been a little bit better and it had been bugging me so I fixed it. Nothing major but I think it helps the story convey the scene better.

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EThe Incident
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Matt a human gets transported to Equtria after an accident.
Human
Twilight
OC
Main 6
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EMason's Quest
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Random
Mason, an earth pony, becomes the apprentice to a decendant of Star Swirl the Bearded.
Celestia
OC
Discord
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Lumadous

Lumadous #4 · Oct 15th, 2013 · · ·

Thanks for faving Shouldn't Be

Cold Spike

Cold Spike #3 · Aug 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Thanks for the fave!

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Kolwynia

Kolwynia #1 · Jan 14th, 2013 · · ·

Thanks for the watch!

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