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Hey everyone, I know you're expecting some kind of news about TNiL, but I'm sorry, my creative juices must be fed and I have ANOTHER fic idea.  I know, I know, I won't be abandoning either BnB or TNiL for it though so be calm young ones.  But it is romance, it's not second person, but it IS romance, and I know how much ya'll like yer romance stories, with all that kissin' and huggin' and what have ya.

Anyway, I'd like a second pair of eyes on it, I don't need anybody to dedicate a huge amount of time to it or anything, I'd just like somebody or somebodies to give it a little preread as I work on it to help me out.  Keep it from having the rather rocky start TNiL did when it first started.

Go ahead and drop me a comment or a PM if you're interested, I'll get back to ya as soon as I can.

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The Next in Line.

Let's just say your luck with the mares isn't all that great, two months in Ponyville and you've had your heart stomped on more times than you can count. That coupled with the fact you've lost your job, your house, and have barely enough bits to feed yourself means your life isn't exactly going so great.  And after another botched attempt at a relationship you're ready to swear off of the whole dating game for good.

But after a night of drunken debauchery you awaken to find yourself in the service of Ponyville's premiere fashionista, your willing to forget your previous pledge to the single life after she proves herself to be the kindest and most generous pony you've ever met, but only time will tell if she'll be your future lover or the next in line of a long list of mare's who you'd rather forget.

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Adventures through Equestria

Equestria is a land filled with magic, danger, and adventure a plenty.  So when two ponies set out into the wide unknown in search of a fresh start there's no telling what may happen along the way.  Join Black Brush and Sunset Spring as they begin a journey that shall engrave them forever in the annals of ancient Equestrian history.  

Yet as time goes on a darker much more dangerous plot shall rear it's ugly head...and it threatens the entirety of the magical land we've all come to know and love...

~So this is my first MLP fic.  If you would like to let me know of some things that didn't work out or could do with some fixes be sure to let me know so I can get on it.~

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#506012 · 1d, 17h ago · · ·
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>>504371 Thanks!  Glad to see it's holding your interest.

#504371 · 2d, 18h ago · · ·
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Hey, I'm in the process of catching up on TNiL, and literally, I read 2-3 chapters a day. And you sir, are perfect!

#466682 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>466674 Making a believable character from scratch is time consuming and takes a lot of planning.  Giving them flaws that work well within their established personality, but doesn't make them totally unlikeable, can be quite difficult.  I have trouble with it sometimes too, but, hey, practice makes perfect I suppose.

#466674 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>466662 How modest. Being an OC writer myself, I sometimes find myself struggling to make my character believable with flaws. I mean, certainly a Jedi should be racked with flaws. If you're a Star Wars fan, you'll know what I mean.

#466662 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>466645 You won't have to step very far :ajsmug: I'm not all that great, just got lucky I think.  :twilightsmile:

#466645 · 2w, 6d ago · · ·
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I must step up my writing game if I'm ever to become as popular as you, good sir. :duck:

#427399 · 5w, 6d ago · 1 · 2 ·
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Hey.  You're a twat.  That is all.

#380433 · 9w, 2d ago · · 2 ·
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Do everyone a favor, and eat a massive donkey dick.

#375582 · 9w, 6d ago · · ·
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Thank you for adding Stability to your favorites! Don't forget to rate!

#351953 · 11w, 6d ago · · ·
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So, someone whom I am watching, is watching me...

Someone whom I am following, is following me...

How can this be?:pinkiecrazy:

Sorry I didn't tell you I uploaded the story. It slipped my mind... I've been a little busy with work. I'm going 'away', 'somewhere' and won't be back in 'some time'. So sadly I haven't had much time to think about my story, nor do I think I will. But who knows? Maybe I'll come up with something, I've been feeling those creative juices stirring... it might just be gas though.

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