>>131763131763 Thank you.
noo! I wanted to read it!
Oh come on, don't delete your stories just because alot of pplz don't like them. In fact, their not liking the stories makes it all the more important to keep them up!
Those commenters often give you advice that you can use to edit the story, or make other works better.
Your Rainbow Factory had potential in that it almost explored a self-perpetuating murder culture. Social systems fascinate me, and others, but you didn't expand on that, and didn't add description.
I personally think your stories had potential.
Keep writing, and you'll keep improving.
As a friend says:
"Perfect Practice makes Perfect"