Hello after a long frustrating attempt to edit the first chapter of my story of" the end of square world" I've come up with a rather elegant solution.

It's something I like to call open editing .

From now on Whenever you see something that doesn't make sense or that is simply wrong Put it and the sentence before and after it into quotations at the end of your comment you may also put something you'd like to say about it or any concerns you may have .  Now I want to be known That I would like you to express your opinions as openly and honestly as possible .  However this only applies to people who actually have something to contribute to the story if you're just saying she had to be mean to me I'm probably not going to take you seriously.  Also saying something generic whilst appreciated is not very helpful.

For example " Dude I think your stories great you just need to work on punctuation "  

This is an example of a not helpful comment by the close I understand punctuation as important I simply lack the understanding of how to implement it properly therefore there's no way I can go to the entire story and and fix the entire thing just because this one,  told me to.

Of course there are good comments an example of this is ...   "Hello I enjoyed your story however I noticed a small error here it is in I hope you can fix it.  (chrysalis being the bug pony that she is then decided to attempt to get more physical.  In her attempt however she STOKED on my cubes. )  If you notice you accidentally put STOKED instead of STOMPED please go back and pay some attention to this paragraph :) "

See now that's a comment any author could appreciate any way so there you go I've now giving it to fruition to comment on my rather awkward writing style as much as you please .  please do not abuse it.  

as always thank you for reading.