Sneak peak :3 · 6:54pm
A little teaser for the 6,000 word chapter!
“I’m getting pretty good at this.” Twilight says to herself.
Twilight walks down the road. Gravel and dirt shifting and crunching beneath her feet. Her arms where swaying by her side, her walk became more fluid, as a result more strut like. Her fur is a greasy mess, littered with dirt and little pieces of rock. Her tail is just as dirty as the rest of her. Her eyes where half closed and passively observing the surrounding woodland.
The forest wasn’t too dense, you could clearly see far into it, the cold rays of sunlight still echoed through the old worn branches of the forest. The white bark radiated with the suns beams and illuminated the surface of the earth with fabulous tint and pigment. Twilight however, had little appreciation for its glorious splendor, she was exhausted. Every step was a chore.
She had walked so far, and no Portland was to be found. A while before, she came across a fork in the road and took the one to the right. There was no sign saying which road led where. Since then she’s been walking. It’s too late to turn around. Not a single sign has been seen since. The condition of the road has dropped dramatically, no longer was it polished and uniform. Now the edges of the road were torn, and lost its solid grey tone to a paler shade. The road had more holes, and slowly got worse the farther she travelled.
Walking, walking, walking.
Yup, I sure can walk alright… Twilight thought to herself in attempt to battle the defeated feeling she has.
Her breath is slow, and consistently so. With each painful exhale misty breathe exits her mouth like a gentle wave in the air. She looks upward. The sun is setting, casting reds and oranges across the sky, making a beautiful splash of colour across the dying sky. The clouds had begun to gather more as well, not many, but a few as opposed to the perfect sky before. Twilight paid no attention to this, her state was beyond unreachable, her mind was focusing on movement and efficiency. Her stomach roared and begged for food.
Walking, walking.
The sun set more, and stars began to show their face on the theatre of night.
Food… water… sleep… any of those would be fantastic right about now… where is everybody… are they all dead? No, the road before was well kept and updated… how did I get so lost… where did I mess up… Celestia help me…
Her thoughts seemed to echo through the forest and bounce back to her as she walked. It’s maddening, nothing moved, nothing changed, just the sky. Just the untouchable, and more or less irrelevant sky. The concrete of the road ended abruptly, and the rest of the road was dirt and light gravel. The builders must have given up after a while… oh no… does this road go anywhere? Of course it does… but to where?!
Twilights thoughts didn’t echo this time. They simply died. This was more maddening than the echo. It was lonely… dark and cold… afraid and concerned… frightful and nervous…
The road continued onward. The sky darkened further, no longer did the sun pepper the sky with gorgeous colours and hues, rather it left entirely. Simply night was left to the sky. Stars and clouds filled the sky with depth and art. And moonlight shone through the forest, filling it with nocturnal blue light, blasting serenity throughout the woods.
I… need… food… water… anything…







>>390774 haha yeah, i figured she'd (Rainbow) be easier to visualize with a better cover art, and i thought i'd get that image out there cuz holy hell it's awesome and it visually exactly how i see Rainbow in this story
Hot diggity damn. Love the cover pic for Touching Rainbows. When it gonna be updated
>>214751
Oh wow!
Okay, I'll do it myself then. Thanks for understanding.
edit: btw, I'll put it in the folder for you. you have no sayz in his >=P
>>214584 that feel, when you don't know how to remove it from the main page... Go on and delete it, thanks for the heads up though mate, had no idea that there was even a fic called Equestrian Earth, I thought it was just a sick name for stories of this type lol
Umm, I see your story: Touching Rainbows, on the main homepage of my group: Equestrian Earth Universe. I've never made it clear before, but any other stories that's not related to Equestrian Earth can be posted in the 'Under-Rated Stories That Deserve Attention' folder. But not the main page itself. I would delete the story itself, but I would like to kindly ask you to take down the post yourself. I don't want to be rude about it and take it down myself.
Again, sorry to have ask you for this.
sorry bout the trobles man. gotta be rough
>>201612 currently working on it right now! I've had some major family issues going on and it's been hard to write, but I'm working on it as we speak! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! I'll send you a message as soon as it goes up
dude i am really anxious bout the next chapter of touching rainbows. please tell me your working on it. i really love the story so much









>Divorce
I know your pain, dude.
Also, gotta love the profile pic.
>>174041 well of course