well i cant have peopel help me since im a only person writer the only way for me to have help is to write my storys in high school

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Wow. Even Rawhavoc has something to say to you.
(by the way, it's "i.e." not "e.i.")
That's pretty hard to accomplish, mister writer.

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well, it made me laugh a wee bit, but all the errors just spoiled most of it.

132518 In his defense, it made me laugh. I imagined 2 computers talking at eachother (go into terminal on a mac and type "say ____")

Dude, you've not even been here for one day, and you've posted a troll fic (if i can call it that), that takes alot of skill.

huh it seems im being a total fucking jackass to you, sorry.

but its a good idea to get an editor and a few people that will help you through most things such as, Grammer, Punctuation,e.i ,;:"!?*.

your just can not write a fiction as soon as you start you account on fimfiction, the fics need planning, writing if necessary re-write the fic, and research on the characters personalitys.

but most people that go on this profile and then see this comment ive made here, and then go to my profile they will think im a hypocrite, but i want the best for you on this site.