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So, I have known for quite some time that my writing and grammar skills are reasonably weak, but I only came up with the idea of asking people if they would like me to write a short story (3000-4000 words) involving their

character(s) (three max) in a scenario of their choosing. These stories would then be added with a shout out to the responder. Would greatly appreciate criticism. Please be very harsh, I will ignore you otherwise. Cheers, thanks for all the love and support. (And wtf My story got featured?)

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Even Gods Make Mistakes

Massive shout out to my editor, Canvas, who is the most amazing pony ever!

Firstly: as I said in the description for my other story, if you don't like it, SAY WHY! I do not mind having it ripped apart, but simply pressing the red button doesn't help anypony to learn from their mistakes.  

Warning: Spoilers for anyone who hasn’t played “Spyro: Dawn Of the Dragon”. In addition, if you don’t like Celestia being a complete bitch, don’t read.

Nodragon knew what happened to Spyro and Cynder. Malafore had been destroyed, the world had been saved. In a last attempt to save Avalar’s heroes, the dragon spirits sent them to a land of peace and harmony, in which to create a new life. In this land of ponies, how will their past change their future? Spyro and Cynder become mates, and together produce an egg. However, having learnt the story of Malafore, Celestia decides to take the egg by force, thus preventing a repeat of history. What happens when a tyrant takes a parents child? Dragon is set against pony, a legend must confront a god and a new life will be created.

Rated teen for shipping and some violence.

Thank you for all your love and support.  

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The old world

Firstly, if you don't like the story please tell me why so that I might endeavour to learn from my mistakes. Secondly, the first chapter is kinda haphazard, but iv gotten into my stride now Later chapters are much more structured and coherent, if you hang in there and actually read through.

Shining armour has retired from the royal guard and has reenlisted in the Royal Equestrian Navy (REN). He is still plauged by memories and nightmares from the war. Can he overcome his past and protect his sister as he sails for the horizon? When they land on the shores of the forgotten world, many dangers await, but so do opportunities to make friends and bring glory to Equestria.

Not all the characters listed are in the pilot chapter.

I take no credit for the amazing work done by the artist of my cover picture.

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#501738 · 3d, 3h ago · · ·
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>>498038 hakuna matata:pinkiehappy:

#498038 · 4d, 23h ago · · ·
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Thank you so much for the Fave of A Cup of Joe! I greatly appreciate it!:twilightsmile:

#386498 · 8w, 5d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the fav

#209197 · 25w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>148507 What up? :pinkiecrazy:

#188543 · 27w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>148507

So etu on even gods make mistakes?

#148507 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>148171 I desired a more masculine colour, like purple :derpyderp1:

#148171 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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I'm surprised your pony doesn't have a manly pink vest. :rainbowlaugh:

#147544 · 33w, 8h ago · · ·
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thankies~

#131893 · 35w, 2d ago · · ·
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Your welcome!

#125885 · 36w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>125883

Cheers! I've got the first chapter down. So a little later I will revise it over some more then get you and Blue to proof read it if it's all good. It's a bit dark!

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