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· Fire Trail is a racer. He has been shown a way how to be better than most pegasi, but will it be enough to win the race that could change his life?
I'd like to thank Kiroberos for the proofread, and for letting me to use his idea (magic inside everypony) which comes from his story "Memory Pending".
The second person I'd like to thank is CLAVDIVS CAESAR, for letting me to use his version of Derpy (Ditzy, in my fic).
Thanks guys, this story wouldn't be possible without you.






>>71954
NOT "AGAIN" 'CAUSE YOU DIDN'T TELL ME ANYTHING, YOU AMNESIAC IDIOT! "DO MY SHIT" IS SO FUCKING BROAD THAT IF I WERE FEELING FUNNY, I'D SQUAT DOWN AND LITERALLY DO SHIT FOR YOU, BE MORE SPECIFIC YOU DICK, I CANNOT READ MINDS LIKE SOME KIND OF PSYKER, THEY ARE FUCKING PUSSIES
AND I AM SWEARING LIGHTLY 'CAUSE YOU'RE THE FUCKING COMMANDER, AS IN "SUPERIOR" AND I VALUE MY ASS ENOUGH NOT TO START FIGHTS WITH MY SUPERIORS,
WHO WAS SO PANTS ON HEAD RETARDED TO MAKE YOU THE COMMANDER ANYWAY?! I'D BASH HIS EMPTY FUCKING SKULL IN WITH MY BARE HANDS!
>>71948
I HAVE TO FUCKING TELL YOU AGAIN RETARD?!?!
I WANT YOU TO GO DO MY SHIT FOR ME YOU LITTLE ASS-SNIFFER!
AND INSULT BETTER!!!
YOU BRING SHAME TO THE FUCKING ANGRY MARINES!!!!!!!!!!!
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ASSHOLE!
>>71817
IF YOU WEREN'T MY SUPERIOR YOUR ASS WOULD ALREADY BE GROUND INTO DUST, ASSHOLE! WHAT DO YOU WANT?!
NOW GO DO MY BIDDING YOU LITTLE COCKSICLE!!!!!
>>43650
DAMN STRAIGHT!
ANGRY MARINES!! ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME!!