I know I said I was working on a couple of fanfics. Well, when I said that, I really meant that I was thinking about writing two or three fanfics. I have to be frank with you: I'm not all that enthusiastic about pony stories like I was a year or even a few months ago. All my ideas for pony stories just sound ridiculous to me. Part of me feels like I'd be better off writing original fiction, while the other half is screaming, "No! You're just being a lazy little prick!"
Anyway, that's just a heads up, if anybody cares. But, with that said, I'm interested in what you might think of an original short story I wrote. I think it's pretty damn good. I wrote it with the intent of getting it published at my college lit magazine (it got rejected...), and then later got feedback on it from people in my fiction-writing class. So it's gone through some rounds. So I'd like to know what you think.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-Eauds5wPzUPpy02OzspmUZWfnA8gDA8x3N0085p4wY/edit?usp=sharing
Just a heads up, though--it's a creepy story. Probably not for the faint-hearted. It's not Cupcakes or anything, but still, I'd hate to rustle anyone's jimmies.






