*Face Palm* · 4:21am
Okay first off This is bucking annoying... I tried to have a simple five hundred word chapter and with this template below for the latest chapter of luna est core noctis.
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[notes; a full week later on the seventh day Twilight reaches the border with the griffon City states she quickly makes herself presentable and heads into town. she enters the town of windbreak and asks where she can help, the pony’s laugh her off and tell her to go to school, Twilight ignores their mean comments as the foolish actions of blindness, instead she walks up to an elder but before she can ask her question the elder coughs immediately twilight asks if she is alowed to do anything to help. the elder just smiles patronizingly down upon her, but twilight takes no offence to the action and instead pulls out the ingredients for a simple cough remedy, twilight offers again this time telling the lady that the potion she is making will most likely remove the nasty cough, however the mare instead tells twilight to put the ingredients away and tells her of her diseas in her old age. Twilight recognizes it immediately and tells the lady that she can cure it all she needs is a bit of time to brew the ingredients into a viable working potion which then the mare would have to drink after the mare drinks the potion she excitedly bounces off the ground feeling twelve years younger her disease completely gone, she then is contacted by a few others in the town with sick or ailing family and friends and is paid a simple sum of bits by each of the patients or pony’s that request some of her remedy’s to take home for use. After the day grows dim and she has helped as many pony’s as she could twilight quietly enters an in she was recommended to by her last patient, entering the inn she pays the bartender for a room then heads up inside the room she lets the spell hiding fang from plain sight drop and immediately is bombarded with a request to feed, after sating his hunger Fang calms down and immediately requests her to start teaching him again, this day she is finally able to teach fang how to fly and notes her surprise about how quick he’s growing. and going to bed with his three and a half foot length body between her hooves. Completely unbeknownst to the rest of the town and the innkeeper of course.]
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I tried to have a small chapter, and what happened. The bucking chapter became a monster of a text file that tried to eat me alive and spit me out for dinner. ughh who else hates it when their chapters get unruly like this, cause I know I do. I could care less about length as long as content gets across.
not even a full page for the chapter template which specifically had changed over the course of the chapters creation to better fit the world building I wanted to work on.
Till next time.
Bloody thirteen thousand word chapter.







The only story I can truely call A masterpiece. 







Thanks for the fave f Still needed
>>444727 The 'immortality' issue will come up quite frequently, I assure you :D As for things changing, well, a lot of things will certainly change over the next three chapters or so, and one of them is aimed to be a real shocker >:D My lips are sealed until then
>>444667 no problem the story has been riveting and I bet Twilight would probably calm down and let her revenge end if she saw Celestia's current predicament. though I think at this point she would just laugh at Celestia's suffering. And I do have an idea for how to permakill an immortal, it involves crystals and the ability to bind the soul to them.
honestly though I do somewhat dislike the fact that you made the immortals unkillable but that's about it for my griping. honestly though I hope things can wind down and Celestia can be forgiven even for what she did it was still for the best of intentions... as far as I know.
Your fav makes me happy :D Thanks
Thanks for favoriting Twilight's Final!
Hey there Xaldon Ajide, really appreciate the favorite. I'm working towards the story's completion, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long between updates. Thanks again and hope you enjoyed so far!
>>383681 you're welcome.
>>383591
So dont think i need to tell ya it's finally up. Thanks for being the first to support my fic.

>>383569 that would be nice
>>383521
Yeah totally my bust I ended up just pulling it down, removing it from those groups, and re-submitting it. If you want me to let you know went it is actually approved I can totally do that