So as most of you might know I am making a new version of Don't Step on a Rune. Yet I am having some  trouble that maybe a few of you could help me out with.

I do not know if I should give the new version the old intro and description or this beta intro.

Original and Classic-

Daniel is just like any other human, except no average human has an anciet rune under their house, get teleported to another world, has his whole damn house come with him or has the ability to use magic not used in centuries and need to fight an enemy he just learns about. He is a 17 year old athletic nerdy guy how has always wanted a brighter, exciting and new world. He has thought of many ways to cope with any situation, is fair just, and is honorable. But that all may go out the window when he is in a world full on ponies, magic, danger and maybe love?

Re-amped and Magical-

The hands of fate have once again turned on the clock of life. A youth is taken out of his ordinary life and caste into a world of mystery, magic, and adventure. Follow the story of Mythic Rune, as he discovers the magic hidden inside of him. Assisted by the Demigod Victor, The Princess Luna, The Elements of Harmony, and others, he will train in the art of rune seals, combat, and learn the past of the Mystics. And the magic hidden within bonds. There are dark trials riding in on a black horse, but friendship will pull Mythic out of the mud.

So any thoughts from the few of you out there?

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