Important: About Songs of The Frost · 4:15am
A rejection from EQD with a list of recommendations to fix, a list of suggestions from friends, and I've realized I have a ton of work to do still until the story is the caliber I'm aiming for. I'm not sure how long this will take, or how much I need to add or revise, but I will be working on it once college courses ease up mid-December and I will be re-releasing it when I feel - and other's as well feel - that it's truly ready. But again, this is going to take time.
I apologize for the inconvenience it causes to anyone, but for me, this is necessary. I must deliver top-quality writing for your sake as much as mine, and what I have doesn't cut it. I have to make people really feel and understand Lyra's desperateness to go to Reindinhal and I haven't done that. I haven't truly established Octavia's motivation to come with her either, nor do I provide a good hook to get people into the story.
Again, this has to be done. I'm sorry.