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    • The Four Stallions of the Apocalypse
      A 3rd person perspective following the actions of War as he changes the world one last time.

      81,978 words · 673 views · 10 likes · 6 dislikes
    Feb
    23rd
    2013

    Well, this information is rather irrelevant but I wanted to get this off my chest for some time.

    The Four Stallions will become a three part story, somewhat like the Lord of the Rings but something different. I just feel that the story of Gurren Lagann needed a bit more depth so I'll do it in this story, plus I'm dealing with characters that need to grow into something similar of the main characters of that anime. Plus, its all for the sake of good story telling, with all these references put in it needs to be done right, so that's what I'm going to do.

    UltimateRuin009 · 11 views
    Feb
    18th
    2013

    Well this is for all Four Stallions readers, if there are any that is. Since Chapter 12 you noticed how longer it was compared to the other chapters. I just wanted to say that if you were a simple reader and would rather read chapters 4000 words instead of 12,000+ word chapters, then prepare to be disappointed. It will from now on be long chapters like Fallout Equestria Heroes or other big shot stories on here that are long in chapters.

    I just wanted to throw that in here with everything that's happening. Chapter 13 is actually turning up pretty nicely with some friends of mine so I promise it'll be good for you too.  

    UltimateRuin009 · 7 views
    Feb
    15th
    2013

    I'm back! · 4:49am

    Guess who's back kiddies? Or well...no one really follows me but I guess I can go and reach out to anyone who cares anyways.

    Now before going to business, the Four Stallions has been at a hiatus, mainly due to my schooling, some new video games I got (Halo 4 and Darksiders 2), and just the typical teenage BS most of us on this site have come to know, in one way or another. Anyways, this blog is mostly an apology to those who even gave a damn about me here, more importantly above all: Masteroflag (this guy has some good fics mind you). I have neglected you, made you think I didn't care when in reality that wasn't the case, and just in general have kept out of touch with my writing side, and just you guys in general. A writer should never do that.

    So from here on in I'll update and find a new editor/proofreader. If anyone but Masteroflag would like to help with that, Inbox me and we'll talk about it.

    Now the reason I won't let Masteroflag do this is not because he's a bad editor, that is just untrue, its because it would be a bit of an asshole thing for me to do after months of absence. I owe up to this guy.  

    UltimateRuin009 · 3 views
    Nov
    12th
    2012

    Billy Mays · 2:41am

    Okay, as easy as it is to target Billy Mays for a troll story (or in this case three) but I hit a writer's block so now I don't feel like writing without putting a bit into something. Which is why these stories come up short, not to mention for the Elder Scrolls and 4 Stallions stories to be as they are, late, and the fact that OP can't deliver.

    No worries kiddies, I got this within the next month. You just gotta trust daddy on this one.

    UltimateRuin009 · 26 views
    Oct
    17th
    2012

    Chapter 12 · 2:43am

    Well, I know I lied to you all about the three weeks thing, but I did have things I have to do, and I was way concerned on where I was going to take this story. But no worries, its done being typed, and being edited as we speak. Well it will take awhile for this one to come out though. I gave him 22 pages on Microsoft Word to edit, and I know THAT isn't any fun at all.

    But, stay tuned, it'll come out eventually, I'll just have to wait for him to do this and I'll be good.

    UltimateRuin009 · 8 views
    Sep
    18th
    2012

    I know it seems rather redundant, posting a blog when there's less then 5 people actually watching you but w/e. Anyways, there is news on the 4 Stallions. The newest chapter is making some excellent progress being made, just a few more pages need to be typed up before it's ready for editing but none the less its making better progress then Chapter 11 has.

    I'd put it at a three weeks minimum before I can say it actually IS done but yeah, it'll get here by the end of the month.

    Anyways, here's a teaser.


    By the time Connor packed up and went to take his leave back the library, the sky had already turned to twilight. The orange light of his aunt’s sun shone brightly, brilliantly, and covered the land of Ponyville in a beautiful orange. It was a true sight to behold looking upon Sweet Apple Acres as the orange light bounced off the sweet red apples the town loved so much. The only thing ruining it was that the fireworks at the markets were still going off.

    “Gee Bro, how long do you think that she’ll keep up these darned fireworks?” asked Spike, rubbing his chin in thought, looking over to where the fireworks could be seen, even if they were faint to hear and see.

    “Honestly little stallion, I have no idea.” said Connor. Looking up to the sky he could see the moon come over from the east, his mother was right on time. The part of the moon of which that grabbed his attention though was how all he could see of it was, it wasn’t a full moon, or a half one, but a crescent moon. On the inside he felt his stomach drop, feeling a bit weak in the legs they started to shake a bit.

    “Hey, are you okay Bro?” asked Spike in worry. He took note of how he was feeling, and just as quickly as it took for his legs to feel limp, he stopped and regained his posture.

    “Yeah, just a tiring day of apple bucking is all, blood brother.” said Connor, blowing off his worry-some question.

    The walk home for Connor was a silent one; he didn’t talk because he knew Spike would just pester him about how he was feeling earlier.

    Welp, that's just about it really for you, nothing huge here gonna happen, or IS there?

    UltimateRuin009 · 5 views
    Sep
    8th
    2012

    UltimateRuin009 here, here to give all the kiddies of the wasteland of the internet some news...

    Alright, Chapter 11 is literally on the way and should be here within a week's time at best, at the worst two weeks time.

    As for any fans of Headache Stories...sorry, no headaches here, so no random ass story.

    UltimateRuin009 · 7 views
    Aug
    21st
    2012

    Chapter 11 · 10:49pm

    Due to some procrastination, and a certain game called League of Legends, chapter 11 won't be out for a while. However I shall put in a spoiler for it.

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    Dear Princess Celestia,

    It’s been about a week since I sent you my last friendship report, and sadly no, this isn’t another one. Ever since the last one, things have been getting better with Spike and Connor, me and my friends too but they’re different cases. I don’t understand him too much¸ he’s still weird around us, not to mention stupid either, its only Rarity he’s been taking an interest to social-wise. And what is with that necklace he gave Spike? There’s something about it I can’t put my hoof on and it’s been bothering me since the day his “older brother” gave it to him. I can feel from it that there’s more than meets the eye when it comes to this thing.  

    Well, aside from Connor’s behavior towards some ponies he has been a lot of help lately. From Applejack with her apple orchard, making sure that she and her family wouldn’t do the apple bucking season alone. To Rarity in some clothes designs for stallions and colts alike, and for it, business for her has been booming lately. She must be incredibly grateful to be able to expand to more than just mares and fillies. And finally to Pinkie Pie, helping her out on some treat and recipe making, even had some ideas for recipes of his own that the Cakes decided to go through, that really worked!

    And I’m happy it isn’t just me learning about friendship though, Connor may be…reluctant,  but he’s done better like I have since we’ve gotten here. I mean, he’s having Spike almost all the time with him now, all that “brother stuff” really dug its way into the two of them. It’s almost like a, dare I say it, a drill dug into the two of them and had them connected. I do know of Connor’s foul mouth, and I repeat that he talks just so… Anyways, everypony here knows about him and his big old, I do desperately hope that he doesn’t say every word he knows, its my job to teach Spike vocabulary, not a pony like Connor. Don’t get me wrong, he’s a really good guy when he wants to, but there’s just something about him that I can’t quite put a hoof on, and it makes me restless at some points.  

    Oh look at me write on and blabber about everyONE else under this roof and not too much over my other friends, they really are great, great mares. I know I whined and complained about learning in a subject that seemed unnecessary to learn, but I was dead wrong. Friendship is a wonderful thing, and I’m pretty eager to learn more all about it, one month into it and its become one of my top three favorite subjects!

    Well, this was one long letter wasn’t it? Well, the ponies here in Ponyville seem to be gathering around the markets for some reason, guess this is my cue to finish up huh? Well, I’ll send another letter soon, or so I hope so. Nice to write to you again!

                     Your faithful student,

                                                                                                                                        Twilight Sparkle.

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    Welp, toodles!

    UltimateRuin009

    (PS: I took this whole spoiler thing from a guy I know named Synergy. I'd advise checking out stories such as "Awoken" or "The Life and Death of a DJ", trust me, they're good stories.)

    UltimateRuin009 · 10 views
    Aug
    7th
    2012

    Help out readers · 3:48am

    Hello good people, I understand that if the 4 Stallions is just a quick read through for some of you, but I assure you that a whole lot more is gonna come once the plot is set in motion. However, to make it truly amazing, I'm going to need your help.

    Now I ain't asking for anything too demanding, I'd just like a little bit of feedback aside from a thumbs up, I'd just like anything that went wrong, grammar, speed of the story, etc etc. Its just that I want to try to send this to EqD...the place of which that takes a writer to write his balls off to get a story on it. I had tried before and was met with a lot of criticism, which I will take to heart but seeing the whole three strikes thing on their rules I figured I'd have my audience give some criticism in the comments. You don't have to do all that...but I'd rather you all who read would so I can tell where I'm going wrong, fix it for future updates, and profit.  

    UltimateRuin009 · 11 views
    Jul
    24th
    2012

    Hello everybrony, UltimateRuin here with the news. Sadly, with some events that had just recently happened, (and a little bit of procrastination) I won't be able to bring everything I promised by the end of the month, but rather, by the end of next month. I'm just unable to spend my time on to this more then I'd like to to be honest. But none the less, a chapter shall be posted within the next 6 days so do not fret please. And again, I'm sorry.  

    UltimateRuin009 · 10 views