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User ID: 7,749
Registered: 4th Jan 2012
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Before I talk about myself I want to know if anyone can guess where my avatar is from. Internet cookie for you if you get it right.

So I started watching MLP because of a recommendation by a friend that it would become a pop culture thing. Since I use pop culture references in my short stories he thought I should know.

About a month later I received a challenge from him. We have had this challenge since 04 with 25$ on the line. Every three months alternating one would challenge the other to write a story. I received this challenge write a 30000 word MLP FIM fanfic and publish it online. My return was for him to write the same but on Twilight (the bad sparkly kind). I won 25 dollars.  

Okay I'm nearing the beginning of my fifth chapter in my new story so I will begin publishing it in the next few weeks. I do have one loose end that I need to tie up. An ancillary villain, Sombra would work for this. Now in my opinion Sombra was an essence of his former self, not a physical creature, think Sauran. I also think he was killed off. However for the story he would be a good character to play with and would be a natural fit, but the story takes place post Sombra death.

As the readers how do you feel about including him and what are your opinions on his capabilities?    

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Out of my Element: Just a Hop Skip and a Time Jump

By its very nature Harmony requires Chaos to exist. When Steel an explorer from outside the pony-verse arrives he throws off that delicate balance. He helped clean up his mess and is now searching for a way home. This story answers the question, What was Steel doing when his lab was destroyed..

This is a one shot continuation of the Out of my Element story. Proof read and edited by Naden Gryphus.

As before I have no problem with people who thumbs down this because they don't like it. However how can I figure out what people like if they don't comment on it..

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Out of my Element

By its very nature Harmony requires Chaos to exist. When Steel W. Smith an explorer from outside the pony-verse arrives he throws off the delicate balance of chaos and order, by drawing the attention of an ancient being living in the void between dimensions. Will he be of any help in fixing this problem or will this new world keep him constantly under everyone's hoof....          

The gore tag is for the three "Broken" series chapters if you don't like it skip them.

I have no problem with people who thumbs down this because they don't like it, but how can I figure out what people like if they don't comment on it....

[3rd look back edit complete 5/6/13] I have gone back through the chapters and fixed all the mistakes, spelling, grammar,and continuity that I could find and have been told about. I am also looking for an editor.

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#80515 · 47w, 20h ago · · ·
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>>80506

Thanks I try to give constructive criticism and I've done what I can to help people else where already.

#80506 · 47w, 20h ago · · ·
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Welcome about Criticism central. Make yourself useful and go troll the HiEs for a while till you're as cynical as the rest of us. (hehe)

#1988 · 65w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>1933

Huh what?  I noticed you commented on my story, I floated around read one of your stories and saw some of your comments that I  found humorous. I then checked your blog found more humor and Fluttershy, if nothing else there are things we have in common including taste in stories. So if I watch you it's an easy click to see who you are following and I can look to see if I enjoy the stuff they write.

#1933 · 65w, 6d ago · · ·
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huh?

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