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Trinary 87938

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    Trinary's Stories (8)

    • May the Best Friends Win
      Dashverse: Rainbow Dash's old friend is coming to Ponyville and it doesn't go well with her new on

      44,590 words · 3,897 views · 366 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Friendship is Empathy
      Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash's friendship is put to the test as past mistakes are dug up.
      12,112 words · 8,667 views · 894 likes · 19 dislikes
    • A Camping We Will Go
      Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh take six little ponies camping. What could go wrong?
      67,297 words · 5,617 views · 614 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Hot Heads, Cold Hearts and Nerves of Steel
      AU Dashverse: The Crystal Empire has returned and the foals of Equestria have gone missing!
      102,359 words · 2,032 views · 237 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Rainbooms and Royalty
      106,195 words · 9,003 views · 1,134 likes · 31 dislikes
    • The Incredibly Cool Godmother of Dinky Doo
      15,073 words · 2,653 views · 323 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Faded Rainbow
      40,013 words · 2,078 views · 127 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Brotherhood is Magic
      3,875 words · 772 views · 40 likes · 3 dislikes
    Jan
    13th
    2013

    Below are some of, in my opinion, the best articulated descriptions of Rainbow Dash from various fan stories I've read. I sometimes borrow from them because they are just so awesomely on target.

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    “Dear Princess Celestia,

    when you have strong friends, it’s hard to see them at a weak moment.  But it’s exactly the ones who hold us up, the ones who show us how to be strong, who need our help the most.  When they fall, they fall harder under the weight they’ve been carrying for us.

    I learned today that even the strongest hearts can be stricken by doubt, even those that carry their friends to greater heights.  And I learned that when this happens, it is our duty as a friend to carry them as they have carried us.  I know my friends will always be there to catch me if I should fall, and I’m honoured that I can return the favour.  

    Your Faithful Student

    Twilight Sparkle

    “A Dash of Gold,” Chapter Two

    A lot of ponies would be surprised to hear what a good boss Rainbow Dash is. She’s lazy, impatient, hot-tempered, stubborn, and thinks everything is a competition — not exactly the traits one looks for in a leader. However, she makes up for all that by having buckets of charisma.

    Now, she’s not some kind of charming sweet-talker like most ponies think of when they say that a pony has charisma. Honestly, when it comes to most of her social skills she’s not that great. What the boss has going for her is this kind of personal magnetism that makes you believe in her, believe she can do all the crazy things she says she’s gonna do. Then she goes and sets some kind of impossible goal and pretty much everypony thinks she’s crazy, but you stick by her because deep down you know that she just might be able to pull it off. Then she goes and does it, and you know why you’ve been following her all this time.

    Because to a pony like Rainbow Dash, ‘impossible’ isn’t so impossible after all.

    Pretty much everypony on the weather team was in awe of her. It was hard not to be. More than that, we were all fiercely loyal to her. Maybe that’s why she got the Element of Loyalty; she’s not just personally loyal, she inspires that kind of loyalty in others.

    “The Life and Times of a Winning Pony,” Chapter 6

    It was completely insane. Common sense said that there was no way Rainbow’s plan should work—the numbers just didn’t add up. I saw Twilight shooting a look my way, and I could take a guess at what she was thinking. I could shut Rainbow down if I really wanted to—it’d be messy, but I’d be within my rights to challenge her on this. She was making a completely irrational decision that put ponies at risk of injury, or worse, chasing a plan that simply couldn’t work. The smart thing to do, the responsible thing to do would be to put a stop to this.

    Except ... I believed in Rainbow Dash.

    Faith can be a crazy thing like that. Rainbow wasn’t some goddess or even some kind of honored ancestor, she was just a normal pony with (if I’m being honest) some pretty big character flaws. She was suggesting a crazy plan that math and common sense said she just couldn’t do, but since when has Rainbow let something like that stop her?

    Our friendship had gone through all kinds of hell, not just over the past few days, but for a pretty big chunk of our lives. I’d spent a couple years hating her guts after Flight Camp, and there had been plenty of times when things had gotten rocky on us. Despite all that ... I believed in her.

    I believed that she just might be able to pull this off after all.

    We all took back to the air with a little extra something pushing us. So we couldn’t pull it off when everyone gave a hundred percent? Well then—I know it sounds horribly cheesy to say it, but we would just have to give more than a hundred percent. Rainbow ... kinda has that effect on ponies.

    “The Life and Times of a Winning Pony,” Chapter 13

    I’m fluent enough in Rainbow Dash-ese to know that meant ‘yes.’ I gave her a bit of time to build up her courage and get comfortable—getting Dash to talk about anything that was bugging her was an exercise in patience. She wasn’t timid like Eepy or prone to letting things bottle up like Blossom could be, but she could be stubbornly independent-minded. It could be a lot of work to get Rainbow to admit that there’s something bothering her that she can’t handle on her own.

    The key was to let her set her own pace working up to a confession. Badgering her would just make her set her hooves and start getting defensive. Instead, I let her approach the issue on her own terms. “So,” Dash began, “I was thinking...”

    ...You have to feed Dash’s ego a little when she’s being all nervous and lacking in confidence, or else she’ll just completely crash on you. Not too much, though, or she’ll start getting a big head. It’s a delicate balancing act, but I’ve got plenty of experience dealing with her.

    ...After a minute or so Rainbow let out a sigh, and pulled back a bit. Not completely out of the hug, but she put a little bit of distance between us to let me know she was okay now. “I just—I have this really bad habit of screwing things up with my friends. And this...” Rainbow’s eyes dropped down to intently study my sofa. “If I screw things up with Pinkie Pie, I don’t know what I’ll do.”

    I put a hoof under her chin, and brought her her eyes back up to meet mine. “Rainbow, the past is the past. You won't mess this up. Besides, even when you do screw up, you always fix things. You fixed things with me, after all. Compared to that, you and Pinkie will be fine.”

    “The Life and Times of a Winning Pony,” Chapter 14

    “Ah, young one, such empty courage,” the ape mused. “There is much strength in you, more than I have ever seen in any creature before. Why hide it behind false bravado?”

    “The Days Just Don’t Get Any Shorter,” Chapter 1

    Please, Ms. Dash was my mother," I insisted, trying my hardest to soften my voice. A lot of ponies say my voice is... unique for a mare. What they mean by that is it's grating. I was pretty self-conscious about it when I was a kid and even sometimes... Ugh! This isn't about me! Getting back to Mac... "Rainbow is fine."

    “The Sky is Falling,” Chapter 4

    Twilight's eyes grew even softer, if that were possible. "Dash. Just because you're the Element of Loyalty doesn't mean you can't expect it from the rest of your friends."

    “When Fears Are Shed”

    “Relax Derpy, Dashie’s not mad at you either.” Pinkie reassured the grey pegasus. “Dashie’s just … well, she’s not good at saying things sometimes, and she ends up not saying what she really means.” Pinkie let her gaze drift over to Rainbow for a long moment, before turning it back to Derpy. “She’s not mad at you, she’s worried you might get hurt. Dashie can’t just come out say it though because she’s not good at saying stuff like that, so she gets all twisty and mixed up. Dashie is a silly pony.”

    “My Little Denarians,” Chapter 12

    I guess that meant Rainbow was crazy, but it had been a kind of crazy we’d needed. Well, that’s not entirely right: Rainbow was plenty scared, it’s just she buried all that fear under a thick layer of bravado and seemingly endless self-confidence.

    That had been enough for the ponies, though. Fear is one of those emotions that’s easily influenced by the people around you. If you look around and see that everyone else is scared, you’ll start getting scared too. It’s pure instinct; your animal brain is going to start screaming that anything bad enough to scare everyone else is something that you should be scared of too. That’s why a huge chunk of combat training is about controlling fear – if one person starts panicking, it makes everyone else around them more likely to start panicking too. Just look at how any large group of people can transform into a terrified mob in the space of a couple seconds.

    But bravery can work exactly the same way. If one person stands up against the bad guys and says they’re not so tough, then it gets easier for everyone else to find their courage. That’s what Rainbow Dash had done for us. More than any of us, she’d believed that we were going to win this, that we would all get out of this in one piece and get a happy ending. She believed it so hard that the rest of us had started to believe it too.

    “My Little Denarians,” Chapter 16

    Trinary · 584 views
    Nov
    12th
    2012

    Hey everybrony. For those of you who follow the Winningverse of Chengar Qordath, centrally around "The Life and Times of a Winning Pony" then you might be interested in checking out "Feeling Regrets" a side-story by CQ that's a companion piece to "Changes" by Comma-Kazie (which is a sort of alternate branch-off the Winningverse so you'd do well to read that first). It's a very good, emotional and gut-wrenching story. Pass the word around!

    Trinary · 93 views
    Oct
    17th
    2012

    A particular awesome fan of mine has put up a page on TV Tropes for "Rainbooms and Royalty" ! Feel free to check it out and add to it, if you'd like! This is undeniably and epically cool!

    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/RainboomsAndRoyalty

    I also have descriptions of three of my stories on the Fan Fic Recommendations page for MLP: FiM (General stories)

    Check it out!

    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicGeneral

    Faded Rainbow by Trinary

    Recommended by omegaman

    Synopsis: After Rainbow Dash's rump meets lightning one time too many, she feels like her reputation in town is ruined as ponies start laughing at her misfortune. Her self-esteem in tatters and her loyalty waning, its up to her friends to help her.

    Comments: An interesting story about Rainbow Dash's psychology, and the Inferiority Superiority Complex that lies at the heart of her bravado. While sad at times, the story is also heartwarming in that it shows the lengths to which the Mane Cast will go to support one of their number when they're in the dumps. Can also be found here, under the pen name Rowanoak23.

    A Camping We Will Go by Trinary

    Recommended by omegaman

    Synopsis: Concerned about the confidence of some of her students, Cheerilee enlists Rainbow Dash to take six children: Sweetie Belle, Silver Spoon, Snails, Dinky Doo, Pipsqueak and Archer on a week-long camping trip to Whitetail Woods. Rainbow enlists the aid of Big Macintosh as her co-chaperone as she tries to teach the young fillies and colts about camping, teamwork, confidence and how to get along and fend for themselves. They are so doomed.

    Comments: A well-written fic with excellent characterizations that remain faithful to the show (with the exception of characters that have not been given a personality on the show, which leaves interpretation wide open). There is shipping, so be advised if that is not your thing or if the particular ship is not your preference. Can also be found here, under the pen name Rowanoak23.

    Rainbooms and Royalty by Trinary    

    Recommended by omegaman

    Synopsis: Alternate Universe: Instead of Twilight Sparkle, Princess Celestia made Rainbow Dash her personal student instead! Follow her through the events of the 1,000th Summer Sun Celebration. A reimagining of "Friendship is Magic".

    Comments: On the surface, a really bizarre premise, but Trinary not only pulls it off, but does it exceptionally well. The prose is well-written, but what really sells it is the fantastic characterizations. Despite the altered setting, the ponies are perfectly in character, and the events and interactions are completely faithful and realistic to the show. Warning: there is some shipping, but very mild, and its a one-sided adolescent crush kind of thing (which ends up being hilarious). Can be found here as well as here, under the pen name Rowanoak23.

    Trinary · 88 views
    Jun
    9th
    2012

    Hello. As of this blog I've completed one story (Faded Rainbow), and am in the process of two more (A Camping We Will Go and Rainbooms and Royalty). I was wondering if the readers and reviewers who have read my stories wouldn't mind sharing their thoughts about how I fair as a writer. What do I do well? What do I need to work on? Have I shown any improvement over time? Which stories did you like the most? What would you like to see in the future?

    Rest assured, I DO read every response I get and value them very highly. As a matter of fact, one anonymous review on Fanfiction.Net caused me to completely change the course of one of my stories and rewrite several chapters that were awaiting publication So let me know what you think.

    Oh and have some adorableness courtesy of the last pony commission I had done for me. Enjoy!

    Trinary · 325 views
    Feb
    7th
    2012

    For those of you reading my latest story, "A Camping We Will Go" I am soliciting ideas for pranks to become part of the prank war. For those you who have no idea what I'm talking about, let me give you the set up: Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh have taken Sweetie Belle, Silver Spoon, Dinky Doo, Pipsqueak, Snails, and Archer (minor background filly) into Whitetail Woods on a week-long camping trip. Now Rainbow Dash has declared a prank war between two teams (Dinky, Pip and Sweetie vs. Silver Spoon, Snails, and Archer on the other).

    To explain the rules, here's an excerpt from the upcoming chapter:

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      “The game is very simple.” Rainbow Dash had told her awestruck audience. “Your two teams will be holding contests to see who can prank the other team. You will be scored on the quality and creativity of your pranks, the number of your pranks, and bonus points if you manage to turn one of the other team’s pranks back against them. You will lose points if your prank fails, if you get prank one of your own teammates, or if your prank hurts somepony.”

      “Be mindful of each other’s feelings.” Big Macintosh butted in. “Ah don’t want to see nopony in tears on account of a mean prank.” He gave them—and Rainbow Dash—a stern look. “And no makin’ up stuff about a camper being lost or hurt or in trouble. We don’t need any foals who cried timberwolf, understood?”

      “Right, right.” Rainbow Dash waved him off. “What he said.”

      Dinky raised her hoof. “Ooh! What if we manage to prank *you* Auntie Rainbow?”

      “Huh?” Rainbow let out a startled laugh. “Ah heh, glad to see you’re aiming high squirt, but don’t get your hopes up. I’m Ponyville’s premiere prankster!”

      “But what if we DO manage to prank you?” Sweetie Belle chimed in.

      “Well…” Rainbow toyed with them, smirking as all six campers leaned in expectantly. “If any of you DID manage to prank the prankmaster, I suppose that would give you an automatic win. And any one request from the most spectacular pegasus around these parts.”

      “And the only pegasus around these parts.” Big Mac reminded her with an eye roll. Rainbow Dash glared.

      “And if you manage to prank Big Macintosh here, then he’ll be your own personal juke box for the rest of the trip!” Big Mac looked like he bit into a sour apple only to find a worm in it.

      “Woah….” Gasped the campers. A favor from Rainbow Dash for anything!

       “That sound good enough for you?” She asked. Her response was a dozen wide eyes.

      “YEAH!” Came the enthused shout.

      “All right then, good luck squirts…you’re gonna need it!”

    ***

    Taking ideas, suggestions, and recommendations from YOU the readers. Hope you enjoy!

    Trinary · 288 views
    Jan
    22nd
    2012

    I've started a new story, about Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh taking some of my personal favorite fillies and colts: Silver Spoon, Sweetie Belle, Snails, Pipsqueak, Dinky Doo, and background filly Archer on a camping trip. I want to have some fun with my favorite foals, outside of and away from their usual friends and zones of comfort. They'll all get their chance to shine and develop. And I love playing with Rainbow as the 'responsible' adult. Oh lordy.

    I posted this the night before yesterday's episode. Derpy may be cannon now, but I still love the dynamic of Ditzy and Dinky as the loving mother and foal.

    Trinary · 291 views
    Dec
    22nd
    2011

    "Faded Rainbow" is finished! I hope you like this look at Rainbow Dash. To anyone whose already read it, I should tell you that its been updated with minor corrections and revisions (nothing major) and an added scene in Chapter 11.

    Thanks to everyone whose read and reviewed!

    Trinary · 317 views