Also, not feeling that good right now 6_9
Short of breath, lung pain... Definitely not my best day today.
Been trying to write. Working on the next part of "Role Reversal". Chapter 5 Part 1.
In case you're not in the loop, for the purpose of exposition I'm splitting Role Reversal Chapter 5 into two parts. "Doctor" and "Patient". Part 1 "Doctor" is told from a third person perspective between Rarity and the protagonist from "Healing Dash". It's complicated, I know. But I'm trying to work it out and it seems like it's going good so far. But I'd like to know what you think. I know I can do it, I just want to know I can do it well when in pony form >.>
So, leave me a comment and let me know what you think.
In the dark of the night, alone in her home, a solemn unicorn held a glass of wine aloft with her magic, occasionally swirling it around before bringing it to her mouth and taking a sip.
I can’t cry anymore, she thinks before swallowing. I want to cry more, but for the life of me, I have run out of tears.
Her front door slowly opens unbeknownst to her and the visitor reaches out and turns the light switch on, prompting a gasp and a moan of pain from the mare.
“Who’s-” She blinks through bloodshot eyes and looks to the door and sees a white unicorn standing there, a heavy look on his face. Gods above, what is his name again... she thinks as she sets the glass down next to the once full wine bottle, now half empty.
“He...Hello doctor,” she manages to say, forcing a smile. “I’d ask what brings you here, but I think we both know why you’ve stopped by... How is he?”
The stallion ran a hoof through his mane before wandering over to the couch where she sat and let out a heavy sigh. “Well... I managed to finally get a hold of one of his doctors there and... and...”
Rarity remained quiet and turned her attention back to the wine glass.
“And I’m not going to sugar coat it... He’s not doing any better. If anything, he’s getting worse.”