Imagine for a moment that you live in a world where everything feels right, where you live every day happily and harmoniously.
Now take all of that away.
With Discord victorious, Twilight Sparkle is forced to leave Equestria, alone, for the real world beyond, where blood is shed and lives are lost on a daily basis, where friendships are broken faster than they're made. Even with her family by her side, Twilight can't help but feel that every step from home is another step into a increasingly cruel reality.
story, so once it's been approved, take a look.
saw your update, as I mentioned in my last comment, I would be willing to continue looking it over....let me know
no problem, let me know when u need me 4 ch 3
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I actually found the comments myself, so thank you for the feedback.
k finished reviewing discordant chapter 2. I actually don't use google docs much-do I need to send it back to u or can u go on and see the comments?