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The Stuff About Me that Nobody Cares About


User ID: 40,642
Registered: 15th Jun 2012
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I'm The Sentient Cloud, a part-time writer and pianist from New Zealand.

To be honest, there's not really that much to say about me. As my stories indicate, I am very much taken with the piano, Red Vs Blue (although not enough so to continue that god-awful crossover), and hard science-fiction.

And... well, that's all I really have to say. Happy reading!

- TSC

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My Private Insult Forum

#449532 · 3w, 2d ago · · ·
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>>443682 Oh, well...

I didn't really have the drive to write it any more. I had more original, more interesting and better thought-out projects going on, so I decided to just shove it in a corner and tell it to never leave. :twilightsheepish:

#443682 · 3w, 5d ago · · ·
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man i was looking though my old cache of favorites and found your red-vs blue fic and i thought you died because you didn't update it in like 6 months but then i saw it was canceled and i just have one question

why?

oh and happy 499th stalker

#418932 · 5w, 4d ago · · ·
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when can we expect the next chapter? :pinkiehappy:

#416746 · 5w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>415251

Just so you know, I'm almost halfway through Act II, and I have to say I remain impressed. I cannot put it down! Seriously, these are both going in my hall of fame for "Quality Human in Equestria Fics".

I take an obscene amount of pride in the fact that I made an original HiE story

But of course! Not many can say they've accomplished that feat. :pinkiehappy: I've been considering trying my hand at it some day, perhaps after I've completed my current project, What is a Name?

On a final note, I really love your taste in music. I can tell you're a fan of Rachmoninov, as am I. Still, I find it hard to believe that a nineteen-year-old young man can play his 2nd Concerto successfully. Sorry, but I couldn't help but notice that from Act I. Heh, you know it's like, over 30 minutes long, right? That would've taken up more than half of his performance.

I'm just being nit-picky. It doesn't change the fact that I am getting some serious entertainment out of Keys' tale. I think I might just finish Act II tonight!

-Key Tapper

P.S. I find it funny that some of my author buddies in a Skype group refer to me as "Key". Not quite the same, but nevertheless I assure you that I chose this alias long before I was aware of your story's existence.

#415251 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·
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>>415048 Thanks a bunch! I personally feel that the series as a whole hits its stride roughly halfway through Act II, which is when I start to get my paragraph formatting under control. The issue for some readers is that II is extremely different from its jumping-off point, and actually has very little actual piano playing.

What I'm trying to say here is that it seems - to me, at least - that those who loved the first story the absolute most are those who are most disappointed by the second. It's not that I feel you definitely will be disappointed, but I feel a sudden desire to cover my ass in this situation.

*ahem*

But moving on; thanks for the praise, and I sincerely hope that you'll enjoy part two. (And I take an obscene amount of pride in the fact that I made an original HiE story.)

#415048 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·
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Hey!

Your story, The Piano Man has been sitting in my "Read Later" list for months now. I put it there for the simple reason that I feel like I could relate to it a little. You see, I'm also an extremely passionate pianist. In just a few months, I'll be heading off to college to major in Piano Performance at Baylor School of Music. Needless to say, the title immediately grabbed my attention. Also,  aside from Classical music, I'm a pretty big fan of Billy Joel. :pinkiehappy:

Anyway, just a few hours ago I took a peak at my "Read Later" box and, upon seeing your story, decided to open it up and give it a go.

I finished it just a few minutes ago.

I really enjoyed it. All biased opinions towards the piano aside, I loved it. Like you said, it wasn't the greatest piece of literature ever written. At times, I noticed several spelling or grammatical errors. However, it was not nearly jarring enough to take away from my enjoyment of this completely and utterly original story.

Props to you for writing one of the few "Human in Equestria" stories I have truly enjoyed! I intend to begin Act II tomorrow.

-Key Tapper

#377893 · 8w, 5d ago · · ·
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>>374460 Well, I was planning to get stuck into it over a month ago, but have found myself unable to really write anything but the Piano Man.

So to that effect, you can expect me to really get back to work after I've properly wrapped-up Keys' tale.

#374460 · 9w, 23h ago · · ·
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Hay, whens the next 'ones who came before' chapter coming out? Loved the piano man btw :pinkiesmile:

#295337 · 16w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>284258 I'm gonna take the lazy road and say "When it's done."

Remember, I've taken a holiday.

#291493 · 16w, 4d ago · · ·
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>>283715

I'm surprised.

sealed in stone is the worst?

I'd think it'd be more witch hunt.

"Burn her on a cross!"

etc.

But yeah, that and I'm surprised Keys didn't mention capital punishment. I think you could have added that in as an interesting tidbit. But that's just me.

Can't wait till the next chapter,

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Hard at Work · 9:27am

I know I've been very quiet update-wise as of late, so I feel it's best that I put up a quick blog post.

As per normal, Those Who Came Before is still on hiatus until I've put out these last two Piano Man chapters. I just felt I should reaffirm that. The first of the two-part epilogue for The Piano Man: Act II is close to completion too. I apologize for the long wait.

Now, in regards to the long wait; I think I should briefly explain that I was drawn away from my writing for a time, as I was given some distressing news regarding a close family member. That's all I care to explain, and I wouldn't have mentioned it at all if I hadn't felt that I owed you guys an explanation.

I'll see you all with the next update.

- TSC.

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'Stories' I've Written


The Piano Man: Act II

(Please read the description. It is necessary if you have not read the previous installment of the story.)

The Piano Man has spent the last month in captivity, forced to play the piano as part of The Great and Powerful Trixie's traveling show. Now he's free, and recovering under the care of the Equestrian Monarchy, while Trixie awaits trial for her crimes.

He's achieved the ultimate goal of every Brony in history: A life in Eqeustria.

But - as he will learn - recovering from an ordeal such as his takes a lot more time and effort than you would think.


This story is the much better-written sequel to 'The Piano Man'. Because the first story involved some rather dark scenes, I have included a helpful catch-up in the first chapter - so if you have no interest in reading a dark story, then you can ignore the first piece and skip straight ahead to this one.

'The Piano Man: Act II' is most certainly not a dark story, and neither is it sad. The sad tag is in place for scenes in which I reference the previous installment, and nothing else.


The absolutely amazing cover image was created by the even more amazing WIL_I_ZIN, (deviantART) who is just... just awesome, for helping out.

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Those Who Came Before

The Canterlot Caverns are a strange and enigmatic place, untouched and forgotten by pony-kind for centuries. So when a strange metal object is unearthed in their depths, it's up to Twilight Sparkle and Lyra Heartstrings to discover the many secrets it holds.

Together, the two of them will have to do their best to understand the remnants of an ancient civilization, and decipher what remains of Those Who Came Before.


The cover-image is a cleverly edited stock image, which was modified by the stupendous Corvo.

Pre-reading was performed by the equally fantastical Timetraveling Pony.

As it turns out, this story is eerily similar to Lyra Heartstrings and the Hand of Man. Due to their similarity, I feel that it would be appropriate to give said story a mention.

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The Piano Man

A pianist from Earth is home on a lonely Saturday, getting ready to enjoy his weekend, when he is suddenly summoned to Equestria - only to find himself being held captive by The Great and Powerful Trixie, who plans to use him as a piano-playing slave in her show.


If you came here looking for the sequel, 'The Piano Man: Act II', it can be found here.

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Red Vs Blue: Epsilon in Equestria

A crossover of Red Vs Blue, the Halo Machinima Series, and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, primarily starring Epsilon-Church, who is accidentally recaptured within the Epsilon Unit, and finds himself in the land of Equestria. Will the resident ponies and him become best friends, or will the situation degrade into a flurry of insults?

(By the way, I don't have anyone to proof-read my chapters. I try to do it by myself, but there's always the chance that some mistakes will slip through, or some sentences will not flow properly. If that happens, I apologize, and ask that you ignore it/point it out so that I can fix it)

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