As the title read, the first chapter of my rewrite of Lab Rat is completed (after several months), but there is only one problem. Well, actually two problems :
-The grammar is so bad that my prereader ragequitted.
-The main chapter is 'horrible'. ~Aegis
As you can see, if my friends can't read it, how could you all read it. So, I decided to place it here, in one of my blog posts so only my 'fans' can read it. After reading your criticism and what I should change, I will upload it on fimfiction, but not before.
Hoping that you will not bleed your eyes out.
~StrawberryFrosting the first.