As the title read, the first chapter of my rewrite of Lab Rat is completed (after several months), but there is only one problem. Well, actually two problems :
-The grammar is so bad that my prereader ragequitted.
-The main chapter is 'horrible'. ~Aegis
As you can see, if my friends can't read it, how could you all read it. So, I decided to place it here, in one of my blog posts so only my 'fans' can read it. After reading your criticism and what I should change, I will upload it on fimfiction, but not before.
Hoping that you will not bleed your eyes out.
~StrawberryFrosting the first.







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>>159235
I'm not even a Voice actor. Don't say anything wrong about me.
Anthony ya crazy Canadian man who I can't call a faggot because your still part of the Commonwealth. Explain this faggotry!
Mainly why you sound like a pansy girl.
Hey!
Just commenting to thank you for reading my story. }{ cannot describe to you the immense rush of emotions }{ felt from receiving approval from a Canadian. }{ know that sounds a little tongue in cheek, but }{'m serious when I say that. }{ felt special knowing that my story was being read in places other than my own homeland, as selfish as that sounds.
Thanks!
>>140646
Forgot about what? You killing me?
I bet you forgot about me.
Thanks for the fave on my fic "Of Rainbows and Men" It is greatly appreciated!!!
Here, have a link to fimfiction enchancements!
http://userscripts.org/scripts/show/131623
note:only works with mozila, and chrome.
Thanks for the fave!