Its finaly geting posted! Azure! · 4:20am
My Story Azure is finaly being posted, after so bally long! yay...
..oh, and is there soemthing special about today> i wouldn't know
My Story Azure is finaly being posted, after so bally long! yay...
..oh, and is there soemthing special about today> i wouldn't know
OKay, for a second i thought i was NEVER going to get this stinking Story done. How long has it been, 10 mounths? feels like years. I mean in all this time, i learned Piano, swiched to a Mac, seen a blue moon(that has nothing to do with the color blue in any way shape or form.) saw season 2 and most of 3...sweet ponies.
For those of you who don't know what i'm talking about recently I Finished a final draft (sorta) Of a story that is somewhat inspired by a song called "Azure," and i named the story the same thing, For those curious about the song...
(The story does't go much farther then Friendshiping, just an fyi)
There you go. Now, at the state i'm in i could put up the image, post the story and be done with it all finally, but no. This story, it was WAY to much trouble to make for me to simply toss it in to the pile of other storied i have like anything else. No, It's my biggest one shot by far at a whooping 15000+ Word count! This story just took full advantage of how i like to write good sties and even started to stray of the path that i wanted it to a little. One of those moments when the story tells YOU what to write. So yeah, as soon as i send it over to Google Docs I'm going to have Editors check over it and help me revise it and small details that bug me but i just can't help alone. Mayber after this i may be able to continue my other projects. Maybe.
Well yeah, i'd like to thank all of you who took the time to read this. All 3 of you. Sorio out
If anypony wonders about why I've been inactive as of late, it's for a few reasons.
1, I've been working with Prereadres to help enhance my story quality,
2, the main reason, i've been working on another story, and a huge one i might add.
This song, is freakin great. On a Booooring! family reunion i had this song stuck in my head for a while. And knowing the weird things that happen in the incredible space that is my imagination, it even started to develop it's own story. I started writing it down to see how far i would get, next thing i new i was writting a huge one-shot story named after this song. Basicly what i do here is take the story told in the song and Extend on it a little.
At least, that's what i was doing at first, but as i'm sure most writers here know, stories often like to go in their own direction. As i kept going the story just kept extending itself. I even have the climax imagined in my head, had for a while, and can't wait to start writing that part, yet i don't want to rush the story. I mean when i write something i want it to be something special.
And apparently this story loves to take advantage of that, given how long it's turning out! I mean, i originally planed to make this a simple One shot about 6-8k words long. Now it's nearly 8,000 words long as of me writing this and I still and a bit of a distance from the climax. I mean the story may end up being about 10-12k words long at the rate it's going, or maybe even longer if it has more surprises for me! I mean, 12k... that's many as 12 thousands, and that's a lot.
I'm having it so the ponys look and name isn't told other then he's a pegasus and has a few nicknames, but other then then it's like a 2nd POv story, and i have got it confused with ones a few times... but i don't think i could do that with such a story. oh well. I might have to change something about that later.
But yeah, i'm working on it all, and to anyone who's waiting on Lost in Lala Land or anything thing else of mine I apologize, I've mainly been focusing on this singular story these days, not to mentio i have school in about a week or so.
Random detail, i'm including an Easter egg, i'll mention the book, Timber Wolf Speaker, this is a reference to Wolf Speaker by Tamoria Perice, which is the first real fiction i've ever read. just thought i'd mention that
Poni should poni poni
What's UP every Pony! I'm sorry for being a slow updater, but i'll try to post stuff faster then... once in a blue moon.
Sriously though, I really don't have much to say. I'm making stories "Lost in lala land" and "The Real Magic" YOu ca see those off to the side. You can also see some other different shorter stories i did.
Currently looking for pre-readers who hope to give constructive criticism.
Also i have a Youtube account. Check there for some of you youtube pony work...and other pokemon work i guess.
I really don't have much else to say here!
Oh, other then I won't be updating soon. I have camping tommarow then i'm goig to prepare for Bronycon!![]()
Hey everyone it's Soriostar here! This spring break(happened this week for me) I've been heard at work with stuff. And i'd like to say that i'm nearly done with a lot of new chapters! Here's the low down. Click on the tittle to see the story i'm updating about.
Lost In Lala Land: Good news and bad news! The good news is that i finished the other chapter! and it's a long one to,! Longer then i expected at least Bad news, i write my long story chapters in Microsoft word, so i have to edit some minor things. PLUS, i have to pick picture to use, so the story may be delayed. Least, a day or two, most another week, but i'll try to get the chapter out Asap.
Branded for life:Some people been asking me about a new chapter for this.(others been asking about bios for other ponies but i'm not sure if i want to do that, i only have so much time plus i have many other things i wanna make, sounds intresting though.) So i might do one more about Dr whoves and Derpy, given them standing togeather in the hearts and hoves day episoode.
To truly break though..: I was asked to make another chapter, and i started on one! But it may be a while, so yeah. PLus an idea is to have other ponies talk, cause i think all the ponies break the 4th wall at least once, but i may not do it, least not for a while.
That's it for the story updates, now here's the other stuff. If you came for my story updates you can go if you want.
There are some other stories. Something i want to post soon is one that i haven't come up with a real good name yet, but for a while i've been calling it "The Real Magic" It's a story where A stallion enters equestra, to move into a town ponyvile, then Pinkie takes him to see all her friends, whether he likes it or not, plus he gets semi-paranoid that all the friends are single mares. Don't worry it's not a ship fic. There may be shipping but it's not a romance fic. Anyway after a few adventures(and mis-adventures) he learns how friendship really is magic.
If you're interested in "The real magic" click here, Password is the best posibe one, It's "Password" It's still beta of sorts, deciding on Ravis personality (me before or me now, though i'm planing to do a bit both) And other editing things. It should be published within a week or so.
Oh, and i've been wanting some Prereaders to help me improve the chapters, and if possible a good editor. So if anyone's willing to please comment! And please, don't be a prereader just so you can get an early glimpse. i'm honrered that you'd want to do that but it doesn't help me improve...
Plus i been planing on making a version of cupcakes with cannon jokes. It's meant to be comedic, and just be a stupid and funny fic. Another one is one that makes fun of bad elements in fan fictions and like. However, i haven't made much progress in those... Plus i have 2 other fics one shot fics, one of Luna helping a depressed stallion, another of how peace was brought to equestria, and one of the mostly dark history of equestria. Though i haven't made much progress on those stories so i'm nt sure they're worth more them mentioning
Ps, something random that crossed my mind, If you just wanted to see Story things you can leave now I used to make AMVs, but then something weird happened... I got a life. (i know, can you beleive it?) Anyway, here's a link to my youtube below. Here i have story videos of my first fanfic(could be better, it was a poke fic, way before ponies were cool) and Pokemon Amvs. Nearly all of them were made in Windows movie maker except a Darkrai "Be prepared" PMV, which was me exprementing with Sony vegas, Along with a few other things i made in my spare time(Like me singing parodies with my bad mic...i was bored okay?), sorry but there's not much pony there cause there...yet, i haven't used it in a long time, It was before i became a brony that i used it. But if any of you like pokemon then go see it and then tell me if there's anything i should do with it.
But anyway Click! I might do pony things with it, after all i did make good AMVs with WMM alone, but with vegas I could do a load more... If anyone reads this part, what you think? But then again i only have so much time to do things...
I also have a wide vary of intests, so maybe oneday i may be making origanal games, cause i have wide range of intrests, but til then.
Wow that was a lot longer then i intended it to be... darn it i was planing on geting a good sleep... now it's 4 AM again wow so many typos...
Pss, something intresthing i thought of, if the alicorns raise the sun and moon, and pegusi ponies make weather and wind, would that mean that the planet of Equestia has no gravitational movement and it's all reaplaced by magical properties? Just a theory...
PSSS...I went hiking down the creek today and got lost a bit and almost was there till sundown...and was down there for about 2 hours. Maybe if i knocked myself out i may have encountered twilightsparkle andhaf my own RL "Lost in Lala land".
Heheh...i so wish....
Guys, shut up about this derpy thing, i mean really, i hate arugments that should've been done with ages ago...SOPA!.
Hasbro said it themselves they're not getting rid of derpy, plus the scean may just been apple messing around.
Really guys, you think that hasbro would go though the trouble of making Derpy cannon just to take her away? I dont.
I just pulled out a caculator for this, and by caculations, i've been trying to reduse the stoies to read best i ccan but, by the first half of the stories i'm reading alone... i have 105,647 words to read! and that's not even half! i'm not sure how i'll make time to read all that, i have my own stories and i am busy.