Stories I wrote that I don't hate
Rarity is busy working on a large order for a client when thoughts of a pink pony enter her mind.
Rarity has gone missing and her special somepony, Pinkie Pie is distraught. Can Applejack help save the day?
"Rarity was only supposed to be gone for two weeks. I had this whole big party planned, there would be balloons and games and cake and the special cake I make just for her. "
"Where is she?"
Sequel to I Dream of Pink, not necessary to have read it.
Reediting the chapters:
Chapter one finished 4/15/2013More Less
Fluttershy's hut is empty, all her animal friends are gone, Ponyville is abandoned, there is no pony around. All that is left is one lonely yellow pegasus.
This is an experiment. The story is unfinished and unedited. I am uploading it in its unfinished state to get ideas for the direction it should take, I have a few ideas myself but nothing that is screaming "WRITE ME". The formatting right now is every paragraph is a single location so there are parts of it that are pretty blocky. This is a rough cut so its not the most readable thing but I'm hoping Ill get the ideas I need to finish it and make it into a great story.
Anyway, leave your ideas in the comments area and Ill choose which ones I like and throw them together and finally get this story finished and edited all pretty.
I'm half expecting this to not get approved so if it does then yay, if not then Ill leave it on the back burner forever.More Less
Since Celestia was forced to banish her sister to the moon, a rift has been forming in Equestra. For the first time in years Celestia can feel one of the strange deadly creatures from beyond the borders of equestria emerging. As she and Luna head out to combat the creature and Celestia tells her sister about all she has missed in the last 1000 years.
(I probably didn't need the teen rating but there are a few rather dark themes that show up and some possible descriptions that might bug the squeamish. But the point of the story isn't to be dark or gory or anything like that.
Got the changes made to chapter 2, I no longer hate it. Now I just need to get off my flank and finish chapter 3 and bug my friend to finish the pic.
I'm putting this on hiatus, I've got most of the third chapter written but I'm having a hard time getting the urge to finish it. If anyone wants me to finish it, send me a message or something and that might get me going on it again.
The pic was done my friend for the story.)More Less