At last, a new chapter! · 10:59am
Hey there, everyone!
I'm really sorry about the delay. Several things happened recently that really screwed up my writing.
First, I moved house, and the 'Net took TEN SODDING DAYS to be hooked up. No Internet, no Google Documents. Woo yay.
Second... Minecraft.
Seriously. I know of Minecraft but I'd never played it. I appreciated the aesthetic, I know what a Creeper is, I'm impressed by some of the constructions and so on, but I was never interested enough to try it. I got it for my 360 back in May, played the tutorial, didn't buy it, didn't see what all the fuss was about.
Then I saw a YouTube review of it and thought, why not, I have the trial on the ol' XBox, let's give it another go. I punched trees and made planks and finished the little house and hid inside during the night, and the next morning, I went outside and started digging down for the hell of it.
And I got it. I could dig and explore and make anything.
I forgot about the XBox version. I jumped straight on the laptop and threw money at Mojang. I lost two full days. And then I moved and I couldn't use GDocs, but I sure could build and dig and craft and kill monsters and oh cool this gold deposit is huge and...
And now I've uninstalled it and deleted all the houses and castles I've built, because it's addictive as hell but it's too much like backbreakingly-hard work to really be fun. You get nothing out of it other than a thing you spent 200 hours building that doesn't really exist anyway.
So anyway, here's the new chapter, and here's the complete table of contents (yes, it's nearly over):
Chapter 18 - Magical Mystery Tour
Chapter 19 - To Hell And Back
Chapter 20 - Sun And Moon
Chapter 21 - Final Flight
Chapter 22 - Second Millennial
Epilogue - Eternal







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Wow you're back! Finally I think you're a AMAZING author and I wish I could write with the skill you do (Really how do you do it?). Anyway good luck with the company!
>>382499
New Cutie Mark?
>>382499
Those spoilers...
The finale wasn't my favorite, and deep down inside I'm still hoping beyond hope that she'll somehow go back to normal, myself, though not for the reasons most people criticized it for. A lot of people complained that it'd ruin Twilight's dynamic with her friends, or they'd necessarily have to be to awkward with her being royalty and thus make it bad (which isn't the case, you've demonstrated yourself that Twilight being royalty can be done extremely well
) but that was never my main concern. I was more worried about how everypony else will react to her. In A Bird In The Hoof how socially awkward and downright terrified Mr. & Ms. Cake were Celestia even in a socially lax, easygoing environment. Yet still, despite the frequency and general informality of royalty in Ponyville, everypony still bows to Celestia, is still jumpy around Luna for one reason or another, and can only be assumed to act in the same way towards Twilight come this Winter.
Anyways, thanks for answering and for (possibly) reading my semi-related rant there. I'll quit bothering you and let you get back to engineering/sleeping/ponying.
>>381043 Not the new chapter but the one after it, now. And yeah, I feel kinda awesome that I picked the name of the Beatles' film/album for the huge slice-of-life-Twi-gets-drunk-and-has-fun-just-before-the-storm chapter. Just like I pegged AliTwi - though the new Cutie Mark grates rather harshly and I intend to pretend it was just a fever-dream
>>381214 I'm doing my best to try to ignore S03E13. It was handled horribly and should really have been a two-parter. This is what happens when you let the creative genius go, I guess...
Though I AM gratified that "Luna-Can-Enter-Dreams" is now canon, because of, uh, jeez, I really shouldn't say. But what the hell. Pinkie hasn't been to sleep since the shit went down, and Luna might decide to spy on her slumberings shortly...
Spoilers!
Twilight Sparkle, burning bright,
How many more must die tonight?
Oh, I'm terrible!
>>380986 Great! We'll be here, so take all the time you need. And angry dragons= more Twilight rage, yay!
Oh and just a quick question that's been floating around in my head: I don't think it would, but canon Twilicorn doesn't really affect the story, does it? Of course if it's spoilery, then I'd rather not know!
>>380986 Aw, bummer.
Still planning on naming your next chapter after MMT? How's it feel that you decided to make the same reference as the show writers, months in advance?
>>373910 Not really close to Alberta. In New Zealand, actually
as that's where I live!
>>374069 Thanks! Sleep would be wonderful at some point...
Really, I'm working on it. I'm just tidying up what will be either chapter 22 or 23 right now (I'm writing the remaining chapters simultaneously).
Dragons. Yay. ANGRY dragons.
>>372533 ??? I actually got a response?! To be honest, I wasn't expecting one and this was sort of my farewell to this story, especially seeing all the others below me who commented over the months too... I'd given up hope....
That being said,
Like I said before, I completely understand if real life got in the way, it happens to all of us. All I ever ask is a sign that my hope and patience is justified, and you've just given me that. Thank you very much!
Best of luck in your engineering endeavors, and try to get some sleep!
AJ has the right idea.
Oh my god you're back.
I'd written you off as one of the authors who disappeared into the aether; this is awesome news.
(And a new engineering company? Located anywhere near Alberta, Canada, or need a newly graduated MechE? /desperate)