• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2013
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Six Hooves Under


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I've enjoyed both of your stories thus far, quite a bit. Hope to see more from you!

So thanks for that.

Your story Space Case is quite interesting. I would like to see more, and I was also wondering if I could make a suggestion. I have seen a lot of stories go bad because authors add a mysterious dark unseen enemy with plot twists. There is nothing wrong with this but unless you pull it of correctly you end up ruining the story. I just wanted to suggest not to add a dark evil background enemy.

~Sincerely
Sigurd Sak Night

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