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Hello, everyone. I'm sure that you are all eagerly awaiting my next chapter, and rest assured that I am working on it. But while I'm doing that, I would like to get a little feedback from you. "Return to Equestria" is supposed to be a mentally stimulating story, and one in which my readers are expected to be asking themselves questions and speculate about what will happen next. So my questions for you are these:

What kind of questions are you asking yourself at this point? What are your expectations for future chapters? Are there any persistent themes that you've noticed? Is there anything that confused you and needs to be clarified?

Just to be clear, I already have an outline for the rest of the story, so it's unlikely that your answers will affect how the main plot points will go. But with that said, I'm curious about well your theories match up with my plans, and I may add some minor scenes to address whatever issues you may have.

Thank you all for reading and being patient while I write the next part of the story, and I hope that some of you will take the time to respond with a comment. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

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Return to Equestria

The sequel to An American Dude in Equestria

Years after returning to Earth, the human finds himself once again brought to the ponies' world. This time, however, his friends don't recognize him and their adventures are dictated and observed by Discord himself. Deception, pain, absurdity, and tension abound.

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An American Dude in Equestria

A botched spell brings a human into the land of ponies. Could this possibly lead to offbeat hijinks? Read on to find out.


Note that this story and all subsequent parts takes place between the first and second seasons of the show.

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#346564 · 12w, 2d ago · · 2 ·
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>>345962 Goddamnit, and here I was, looking forward to another chapter.

#345962 · 12w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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>>345712 Dead IRL would be too much of a stretch for me to make. He could've simply grown tired of pony and/or the fandom and/or the story.

But e-Dead in this website? For sure.

#345712 · 12w, 3d ago · · 2 ·
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>>345686

:fluttercry:

But, eh, you're right I suppose. You think he's dead?

#345686 · 12w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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>>345679 Your hope is missplaced. He has come out to talk to his readers before, regarding his story or something else. If this was something akin to military duty, which I hardly find plausible, he'd post a message to us, concerned readers.

The fact that he didn't clearly shows that he doesn't care about us or his story anymore.

Do as you please. I wouldn't hold my breath.

#345679 · 12w, 3d ago · · 2 ·
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>>345677 Eh, no reason not to hope.

#345677 · 12w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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>>345675

Yeah, because purposefully neglecting all questions regarding his story followed by a sudden and prolongued absense does hint that he will be coming back.

:ajbemused:

#345675 · 12w, 3d ago · · 2 ·
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>>345670 Doesn't mean he's left.

#345670 · 12w, 3d ago · 1 · ·
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>>345386

Last Seen: 9 weeks, 4 days ago

#345386 · 12w, 3d ago · · 2 ·
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>>344098 How do you know? If you don't mind me asking.

#344098 · 12w, 4d ago · 1 · ·
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